Reviews for Fractured Glass, or Come Undone
jeyelsee chapter 1 . 4/25
Beautiful indeed
hogwartshoodlum chapter 1 . 8/25/2011
Beautiful. I can't get enough of your descriptions of tiny details that others just brush over. Keep it up.
Red Whirlwind chapter 1 . 6/21/2011
That was very good! :D
Unyielding Wish chapter 1 . 6/5/2011
Ahhh...
xartxisxaxbangx chapter 1 . 5/8/2011
It's perfect. Almost the epitome of what NejiHina fics are.
Fenris Jin chapter 1 . 5/7/2011
I am so love strucked.., Is that even a valid expression? XD

Lovely NejiHina. :)
AnimeLover365 chapter 1 . 5/5/2011
Simply put, amazing. It really grab my attention and didn't let go til the very end. Keep on writing NejixHina stories, in fact youve actually given my inspiration to write a story for this pairing. You're definitely getting a shout out when I post it!
dazynl8 chapter 1 . 5/3/2011
omagaaaaaaawsh! I love it Alina! thank you thank you THANK YOU! you are the bestest XD

You are so talented, I am always blown away by your descriptive language, your word pictures and metaphors. They are beautiful and I am always left in awe by them. I can't even pick a fav line because it was all so amazing.

You certainly have NOT done irreparable damage to this pairing. I don't know why you'd even suggest you could do such a thing. You've complimented it plenty and, I'll have you know, have even provided me with my inspiration for HTF. I'm so glad you posted this. It was brilliant, as usual, and now I am the one who is jealous of your talent. Especially with word pictures. You have to give me some tips one day...'How To Make Comparing Hinata To Rocks Complimentary'. D

thanks so much for this wonderful read. This won't be the last time I read it.

xo

Dazy!
HinawithLove chapter 1 . 5/3/2011
I really like it...good job!
NinjaSheik chapter 1 . 5/3/2011
LOVED IT~!
naash chapter 1 . 5/3/2011
too lazy to log in

that was beautiful.

:)
etoileetneige chapter 1 . 5/3/2011
Very well written and poetic, though... I think it stands by itself rather strongly even without the song. I might be biased, though.
wingedmercury chapter 1 . 5/2/2011
Wow! Such beautiful descriptions- Comparing Hinata's lips to poisoned wine, the scene where Hinata is naked and weeping by the water, and finally that last bit where they are embracing! I'm totally sold on Hinata x Neji. This was really sumptuous. Thanks for posting it!