| Reviews for A little bit of Hell |
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   dannisez chapter 10 . 10/14/2016 Oh. My. God... Just loved it. Thanks for a fantastic read |
| 12122016 chapter 10 . 6/23/2009 Wow. I read this through the night and I bookmarked it so I could finish it this morning. I loved it! Great story! |
| VintageNicky chapter 7 . 11/5/2008 Jareths brother makes me laugh! Love this story, very cute and very well written! Now Ill just read the rest XD |
| DaydreamingPenguin chapter 10 . 9/12/2007 I've just finished this amazing peice of work, and I must say, you have a wonderful way with words. If you ever need someone in a pinch to read over your work, or to help with grammar or words, I would be glad to help. If not, keep up the wonderful work! -Penguin |
| sweetbabby33 chapter 10 . 6/27/2006 Lovely,love everyting you wrote~~!Hope to hear from you soon. :) |
| BlackMagicAngel chapter 1 . 10/24/2005 Sorry im reviewing before i read because i know the song its one of my favorites... well i like it anyway... Its called "The Game" by Disturbed... I dont know if anyone has already submitted that but i kinda wanted too haha... anyway I'm expecting great things so i will give a real review later |
| Forevermore33 chapter 10 . 10/8/2005 Great story! The ballad really turned out well. I hope you right more in the Labyrinth genre. |
| lyn chapter 10 . 10/7/2004 write more |
| mouseisi cant be assed to sign in chapter 9 . 4/14/2004 i'm so sorry, but i do not like the twins. I dont know why, but i hate having children in the stories that seem really fond of jareth. it doesnt seem to be his character! I hated the little girl, she was always hugging everyone, and shouting. the boy was ok, i suppose. But i didnt like the whole finishing sentences. Sorry, but maybe you could make another story, becasue you are good at wrting. I cant really say your stroy was a downfall bcoz of the children because i am writing one and it has a little girl in it and shes his neice. Jareth and Her dont get along. Could ya read it andf give me a few pointers? I have writers block! well, good story. love mouseisi |
| mouseisi cant be assed to sign in chapter 10 . 4/14/2004 I |
| akuma-river chapter 10 . 3/25/2004 Great Story. |
| NowDefunctSorry chapter 1 . 3/16/2004 Lovely, I loved it. Only a few spelling errors (spelling, the bane of my existance -.-') perhaps if you had a beta? *waves* I'm hopeless I know. Anyway, LOVELY. |
| JadedxVampire21 chapter 10 . 3/9/2004 That was really sweet...But i don't get the whole Ivory Tower thing...Aw, you said 'end', but i want another chapter! *pout* Oh well... |
| Ana Morales chapter 10 . 2/29/2004 Very nice! [claps] Brava! However, you may want to go through and really proofread this thing hardcore. There are a lot of turns of phrase that are ever so slightly off...watch the spelling, too. Keep it up! |
| Bonnie chapter 10 . 12/7/2003 NICE! |
