Nice story!

'bout to cry, 'bout to cry... oh damn it! too good! just let me die of tears already!

I love this so much I've read it a bunch of times. You really should write a prologue!

Awww, omygod, one of the CUTEST endings I have ever read! I literally just said aww out loud coz they're so cuuute!

it needs more, so mutch more, because I love it.

This is one of my favorite story's yet :3

That was so sweet. I cried. Well, that might have something to do with the fact that i had a shitty day today, but still. I cried. I loved it!

OMIGODS! THAT WAS SOOOOOOOO AMAZING! IT WAS SO SAD AS WELL! I CRIED THE ENTIRE TIME!

Ok I love am huge fan of all your work and loved reading this. I write some poetry and I was sitting on my roof hiding form my parents reading chapter 1 and listening to 24 and I was struck with inspiration. I felt like I was possessed.

One complaint. There was a gaping plot hole.
Kid and his crew had handled the location of the spell book and they know where it is kept. The witches want the book. Maka was talking to them saying goodbye. They could have given her the information and made it so that she needed to be there to find the book. So the witches bring Maka to the site and the Crew anbushes them saving Maka.

I get why you couldn't do that but next time don't have Kid have the information that could save her life. Make it be someone else.

Awwwww! That is so sweet! You wrote it so well, i could imagine everything that was happening! And i love how you switched their roles, how Soul was feeling guilty and how Maka was the hurt one. :) So Sweet! Thanks for writing! Keep it up. :D

Amazing. This story MUST have been thought-out for it to turn out like this. That first chapter was a smidge depressing, what with Maka being beat and the mirror conversation and all, but I inwardly cheered when BlackStar and Soul realized where she was (that part was very clever by the way) and got deadly.

The second chapter was the healing process, which I'm glad that you put in instead of just ending it after Maka was rescued. Soul leaving all of those hints and Maka not getting them...sounds about right :) The ending was definitely not too cliché for me, and I enjoyed that part because Soul was right (he would know, at least) in the fact it:s better to have someone to wake up to after a nightmare.

It was fairly deep when it came to Maka's "appreciation" of her life after she was rescued. Thank you so much for writing this!

hahaha wow lol u did tht to ur friend hahahand nice job on the story btw

Great job! One of the best Soul eater Fanfics I have seen!

Love.

I just loved this story. The beginning was really hard to read. My reactions were, "Cryptic, cryptic! Sad! So sad!...(squeeky voice) cuuuuuuute!"

Just so you know, I fangirling all over this. I like your style. This is the first SoMa fanfic I've read so far that I actually liked. :] Keep it up.