This is so funny! Especially the ending!

Haha
"The door wasn't even shut before Edmund's mind was already forming plans to find Peter and inventing an excuse to run both princes out of Narnia before the end of the day."

Priceless

I love Edmund/Lucy sibling bond.

Very funny. I just love edmund. He's like the elder brother I've always wanted.

I laughed and enjoyed this a lot

Love over-protective big brother Ed.

AWWWW sweet. edmund was soooo ooc in the third narnia i wouldnt have thought he would be so oblivous to lucys problems good story lol the ending

Allyson, wow. I have not laughed so hard in so long at a last line. You captured the characters perfectly and your grammar is good. Can not wait for your next work.

i positivly love this story. i love sibling fluff. this is great

this is a wonderful story. it emphasises on the fact that lucy thinks she's not that pretty and edmund giving her advice. a couple of funny bits too... an interesting read

i love it! they're so cute i'm gonna die! :D

You really got all of the characters' personalities well! I could really see Lucy having those doubts and ed saying the things he did. Well done :)

Very cute :)

*adds to community* Notifying, because FF doesn't.

Hee. Loved the bit about Edmund's opinion of how good at catching Lucy is. :D

Loved It! :D

Aw! Super cute!