lov it so much i had to reread it again

love it

Damian is a sweetie (he tries to deny it)
Thanks for the story! I enjoyed reading it!
Keep up the good work!

I love the last lines. Good.

This is just so adorable! I'm smitten.

omg i loved it dami is soooo cute!

Damian, again with those knives (lol, I reviewed the sequel to this story first, which probably wasn't very smart) and LAWLS at his "demon-spawn"-iness. Not a word, who cares, it is NOW. Loll. Aww, Damian, his unrequited love (at least I think it is...) And the WallyxDick, YES LOVE IT. The ending was adorable and Damian is probably the only one who will take McDonalds over Alfred's cooking.

Sorry if this review seems all over the place, it happens to be about 3am where I'm at and I'm pretty sure I'm running on backup energy right now. _

hmm regularly I don't like shlash... but this was good! I give you two thumbs up!

Damian was being all jerkface and fail and then suddenly there was cuteness!

Great story!

Awwww... Damian's adorable. And he'd murder me for saying that.

Perfect. That's really all I can say because this is so awesome.

nice story. it actually makes sense that the reason Damien is so rude 2 Dick in the comics is cos he has a crush on him.

There are just not enough stories about Damian having a cute crush on Dick...and the fact that you also combined that in a crossover with Young Justice is perfect! By the way, there is /never/ enough oneshots about Wally admitting he has a crush on Dick, /never/. So this oneshot had two of some of my most favorite elements. Actually I'll say this right now before continuing, I noticed you also enjoy writing about Tim and Conner. You write almost everything I love! Although my OTP is DickxBabs...buuuuuut I can't get enough of him with Wally, or with Roy, or with people fighting over him in general...ok...anyways...

I loved this. To Death. You didn't over complicate the concept that Damian accidentally got sent to their universe. You got to the point that everyone wanted to read. Damian's sexual tension for Grayson being brought out onto Robin, and Kid Flash's hidden jealousy and curiousity onto whether or not Robin is Gay. The plot was pretty much amazing, and the scenes you chose to write were awesome as well. by the way, I really enjoyed the random tidbits of Miss Martian about to feed the team food poisoning, that's just hilarious!

I'll start with the ending, because it was perfect. You seriously got Dick in the comicverse with Damian down the way I like him! Caring and brotherly! And I love how Damian never really admits what it is he wants until he's pushed (like you know...admitting he wants grayson) but he still has too much pride to admit he's in the mood for some McDonald's! Luckily Grayson knows him well! And it's just downright adorable that Damian has a secret crush on Grayson. You aren't even too obvious about what their relationship exactly /is/ but you did it perfectly where the audience has to wonder if they're in a relationship and you find out: "Awwwww...Damian has a cute crush on him! That's cute!"

I also loved how Kid Flash is still not willing to admit his crush on Robin, so Robin pretty much steals a kiss from his and tells him to own up and that THUMBS UP! Genius, that was hilarious, and so ncie and light hearted. I loved it to death.

I also really enjoyed that scene, and I wonder how you came up with such a cute scene. Robin flashing his light in Wally's face because he's figured out that Wally likes him. And I love how you don't outright say anything! Everything was simple and implied and made me fangirl the whole entire time!

What else can I say? OH! I LOVE Damian through this whole entire thing. My favorite line from him, aside the comment about Alfred's food, was when he called their universe's form of fun retarded. That's totally him! And the fact he was playing with knives, oh Damian you sociopathic psycho with constipated feelings...

OHMYGODIJUSTREMEMBERED! The best part of this WHOLE ENTIRE oneshot though was when Dick was all: "I deserve a statue!" because it was simply...I say this word too many times...PERFECT. I bet grayson of Damian's world would whole heartedly agree.

You already know how I feel about your writing style, but I'll say it one time. I love the simplicity, the genius in words, and the plots you come up with. And I can't believe you know Zeraphie in real life that's pretty darn cool! Must be nice having someone you can fangirl with over Young Justice!

Anyways...this overall oneshot is one of my new favorites of all time. It just had way too many elements I loved! It was funny, has WallyxDick, had Damian's cute crush thing, had great writing, and it was light. I love light hearted fics that aren't fluffy. They're the best. THankyou for writing this! I look forward to more!

- songsix

This. Is AMAZING. Lol! I love you so freaking much right now you wouldn't even believe it! xD

Seriously. That last scene b/w Damian and Dick? My heart is /singing/. Awesome job. :3

-RKL22

lol I'm not the only one who thinks Damian is a McDonalds kid XD He just loves there happy meal toys