I look forward to your next update on orca hope its soon

Well, I don't know why everyone else is complaining, but I liked it.

now things are starting to get intressting :D . plz tell me you will update soon.

Updated the damn thing now!

I like Orca team.. but where the hell is it now?

Update.

Shame you killed it off, though the last 2 chapters stopped making sense.

Have no Idea what retcon actually means but it's a real shame you stopped so continue.

Halfway through the fic and you still haven't figured out what to cross over with. Here's a tip, figure out what you're crossing over with and don't start the actual crossing over late in the fic. Seriously, this is getting a little annoying. I'm starting to think that you forgot that you wanted this to be a cross over.

Your decision. I actually don't mind, 'cause I've never played Space Marine, but then again, I've never played Mass Effect. I can't win...

Good luck anyway!

Very Nice idea personally i love mass effect more.

good story but you had unexplained jumps. like you had them going into possible combat then out of nowhere the quarians show up. And wheres their shuttle?

Ok. Not that I wasn't annoyed at the retcon, but I can see where you are coming from and an ME x-over would kick serious ass. So I'm still gonna read.

Bugger.

I was looking forward to what you said you had planned, but you're the author.

Good luck anyway.

Any chance of at least cameoing Titus?

No?

Damn. Had to ask.

its okay man Warhammer to a to screw up place I would stick any one in. To many damn problems to any start bitching about it and mass effect well ending sucked ass so do try and change that please.

What the Hell happened to the Warhammer cross over part of this story?

What did you do this for? I was interested in the wh40k plot and you with out even a authors note delete something like 11 chapters and make confusing introduction of mass effect.