It's good

this was such an enjoyable one-shot! tenlunch is hard to come by, and good tenlunch even harder. i like how you explored some of the biggest obstacles to a real relationship between the two - notably the difference in their morals/values and how the two lunches must feel about the other's relationship with ten. the bittersweet ending was very believable but left me wanting more! thanks for sharing!

have you got ANY idea how many butterflies you gave me with this fic?
i ADORE Tien and Launch, and you wrote them perfectly! it's so nice to actually find fanfictions about them. ah
i'm super happy that you wrote this, and i'm still all mushy from the fic. :D great job! smooches!

Aww! Not only was it cute but it was so in character it could be a missing scene. Keep it up.

awesome!

Really cute! I love it! 3333

Everybody does seem in character. I like the blonde launch parts the best.

LOVE IT!

Tien X Lunch is my favorite couple too. It is nice to read a fic about them.

Fluff and all, Tien is really hard to write, specially since he trained under the Crane Master and Mercenary Tao because he wanted to become an assasin. After leaving his master (and by Roshi's graces)he felt that he owed something to all the people he had wronged, plus he became a bit obssesed with surpassing Goku.

Tien is the type of character that gave a 180 degrees turn: from cruel assasin to honorable warrior.

Really cute story, and keep the good work.

I don't see a whole lot of tienlaunch fics. Good job, keep up the good work.