Reviews for Promise |
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Guest chapter 1 . 10/2/2015 Sweet and depressing |
Guest chapter 1 . 3/24/2014 ... |
Guest chapter 1 . 11/18/2012 :( |
Aww chapter 1 . 7/8/2012 So depressing. |
Im not who u think i am chapter 1 . 12/29/2011 I swear this has got to be one of the SWEETEST kleptoshipping fics i've read. I totally love this |
Darkaina chapter 1 . 11/4/2011 sniff sniff good tear jerker- poor yugi... |
JelloGirl323 chapter 1 . 10/5/2011 (cries) Aww! Sooo sad! gave me the sniffles! . but other than that ...loved It! |
The Heart's Notebook chapter 1 . 6/17/2011 This is so sad, but like it all the same |
animedprincess chapter 1 . 5/31/2011 That was awesome and so saddening. I was actually crying at the end. Poor yugi and bakura and Darn that girl. Loved the story. |
Jonouchi Katsuya chapter 1 . 4/29/2011 I like the thought put behind this fic. I think you should work a bit on it's execution. For instance, you had "Flashback" be most of the story and you even had to say it was a flashback. Try to think about how you could better arrange this story for better effect. You also used the word "koi" which in fanon is "lover"? but it is just a colorful carp if you want to know the real meaning. Other than that, I think you have a very heart wrenching story that deserves to be read. :) I think you did a very good job of conveying the emotions. |