| Reviews for Naruto: Rise of Hellwing Naruto |
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  Guest chapter 5 . 8/4 More please |
 Hmason chapter 5 . 8/24/2018 i was loving this story dammit UPDATE! |
| TrueUZUMAKI chapter 1 . 8/6/2018 lots of love from me to this story pls carry on... |
| reptoholic chapter 4 . 3/27/2018 Again, great job. I love your work |
| reptoholic chapter 3 . 3/27/2018 Some skinship! |
| reptoholic chapter 2 . 3/27/2018 FUCKING AWESOMEEE! I LOVE THIS |
| reptoholic chapter 1 . 3/27/2018 Love this story, third read through |
| ByUzumaky3000 chapter 5 . 1/15/2018 Cuando vas a empezar la |
| Khavix chapter 5 . 9/15/2017 Is this abandoned or discontinued? |
| vincentas1121 chapter 5 . 3/21/2017 So are you going to do the rewrite or is this story abandoned? |
| KakeruPB chapter 5 . 11/26/2016 Ouch that's going to be a pain considering how long you made the chapters. Anyways to be honest adding character's from another series to Naruto harem is kind of unnecessary in my opinion. I think he has enough girls already. That and it would be easier to work on character development and relationship with a smaller amount of girls. Seriously, having MIto, Kushina, Naruki, Megami and Kami is enough. Their are no need for more girls. As for the event's that were unnecessary? I don't which they were their were so much going on that I don't think I spotted those parts. |
| manny21 chapter 2 . 11/26/2016 i love it. much more development. |
| manny21 chapter 1 . 11/26/2016 this was a brilliant story. the angsty feeling fits considering the fact the majority of the story takes place in hell. the way you potrayed the demon naruto completly fits the way it should be. he is shown as being extreamly powerful. also that reference to gilgemesh. and i can't forget, the way you handled the way you made kushina and mito being naruto's slave was ingeneous. making their relatioship simaler to a samurai's relationship to his or her master wile creating a romance the amount of time that has passed it would make sence for a romance to start budding. i don't have problem with bashing as long as it isn't itaci because itachi is awsome. although you could clean up you grammer mistakes and yami literaly translates into darkness. kami has two translations spirit creature and light shinigami is the only actual shinto god. this story is an example that any one can be courrupted. overal this is not a perfectstoy but i love it anyway |
| AlucardDHellsing chapter 5 . 6/11/2016 So...Fucking...Good. absolutely love this story |
| ThedemonlordPingu chapter 5 . 5/20/2016 good fic i hope to see it continued with the re-write when you write it keep up the good work |
