Great story

You're evil! Why can't I stop reading! ? It's too good to put down! I need to go to bed tho!

Oh i love dis story. I love it when someone completes their story. Can you please write another jakeward story .

I want sequel! XD

i just thought of something, what if Jacob went to the Volturi and offered to work for them if they allow Bella to live that way Edward wont have to go against his morals?

You need work on your punctuation. This is how you should punctuate when someone is talking...

"Fucking Edward," he once again said frustrated as he reached La Push and was bombarded by the thoughts of his pack members.

Note the comma before the closing speech mark and the fullstops at the end of the sentence.

good story ;)

ugh i just hate bella.

I absolutely love how you made the pack and Sam understanding of Jacob's imprint on Edward instead of kicking him out or trying to kill him like all the others i have read! .

Bloody hell! This is a fantastic story! You just turn me into a edward/Jacob shipper (only if the writers write like you do ;))

This was interesting ending to this chapter of their lives. Its open ended which leave a lot of ways for them to go. I also saw setup for your spinoff which will be quite a good story.

maybe bella should end up with someone also can one of the wolves imprint on the Cullens to add more drama

leah and jake so should nor be together

I wanna murder bella...

not a bad way to start this