It's awesome! can't wait to see if you post more :) it's a wonderful idea.

You should continue this! Really good retelling skills :)

Ugh I hate it when something good leaves you hanging. Please write more you had a good thing going

Write more please. This is my favorite fairy tale, and I would love to see more of your retelling skills. Please.

More please! Love East and this seems very promising!

Lov the beginning on how it starts out as a dream. Maybe u could add a little more intensity or foreshadowing in the dream to keep the readers interest. Other than that, good job! I hope I get to read more:)