Reviews for Downfall |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I'm speechless. This chapter had me on the edge of my seat the entire time! Poor Luke. I absolutely love your depictions of Vader and Palpatine- they're very much in character, it makes the whole story seem so real! Vader in particular is interesting to read- he is just so relentless. That scene where he brought back Yoda's stick and robe before Luke was chilling; although, given Obi-Wan's Force advice to Luke, I'm not sure if we're to interpret it as meaning that Yoda is in fact alive, and that his death is actually a ploy to get Luke to feed into his anger and turn to the dark side? On that note, Palpatine's plan is very clever; I honestly have no idea how Luke will be able to foil it (subconsciously at least, cause I don't think he's catching on quite yet). Although actually, I have a feeling Mara will be of help in that regard. Truth be told, I'm not much of a fan of Mara Jade, but you write her well and chapter 2 (her POV chapter, if I recall correctly) was fantastic! The fact that the Rebels all think Luke is dead is worrying; if Luke has any hope for escape, it probably rests with Mara Jade. Anyway, I hope to see another update for this very soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ohhhh you have no idea how excited I was ri get the update email for this story after so many years! I'm so thrilled you've come back to this one, I think of it often and I've re-read the first 3 chapters several times. So excited to see where you take this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahhh! I love this fic and I'm so excited to see where it's going! Especially with this information Luke desperately needs to protect. (Also, I love your depiction of Vader and Palpatine. That last line? Chilling. I love it.) |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a tease?! Can’t wait for more. Awesome story. I don’t believe for one second Leia believes he’s dead. Hoping for more real soon! Great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I feel so bad for Luke. Wish someone, Mara or Vader would get him out. As always, excellent writing and very captivating. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm so happy you continued this story ! I thought it was completed. You really have an exquisite mastery of the characters. I love your writing's style. I hope you will update the continuation soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() More here too? :'( |
![]() ![]() Palpatine lied. I hope Vader kills him. Mara and Vader? Wish this were finished. Hard to read but am hooked. |
![]() ![]() I have read several of your stories and have enjoyed each of them! This one is painful but so good. My poor Luke. I do hope you continue it at some point! I’m intrigued to see what happens with Mara in particular. |
![]() ![]() Poor Luke, you have kept him in that cell 7 years already! Please, oh please, say you are still writing and will finish this and your other stories. Please! You are one of my all time favorite writers. Please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So I was driving in my car and found myself thinking of this story, specifically when he force pushes Vader and Mara tackles him. You described everything so well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is so well-written and interesting, I assume you won't be continuing it at his point, but rest assured I'd definitely be interested in reading more if you did :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Chilling to the bone, but as all your stories marvellously well written and clever - even we as the readers don‘t know who is lying and who is not. Your torture scenes never fail to give me a major case of the creeps, sometimes it‘s so gruesome that I want to turn my head away and stop reading, but they convey in a unique way all the horror, pain and desperation a prisoner must feel - in one short word it feels real. Movies and most fanfiction gloss over what you bring in front of out eyes so clearly - there is nothing nice or heroic about war. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Congrats you two. Now Luke is going to kill himself |
![]() ![]() It's several years since you updated. This fiction is very interesting: is there any chance that you will go on? I really hope so. |