I love your idea of Kirk’s touch creating Crystals and Crystal light for Spock. Especially when you carried it into your other stories when Spock lost his home planet, his Mother and was so devastated. You are such a good writer, but must say, I only read your stories that team Spock and Kirk. I can just not see Spock and McCoy as anything but friends.

It was scary and fascinating.

Very cool!

Such a great story. I absolutely loved it.

God, I started to read your Keeping love series and god - even though I normally prefer Spones - this verse and the relationship between Jim and Spock made me so incredible happy - it is a wonderful verse and I enjoy reading it so much. I don't know how you do it - how you are able to write so brilliantly but never stop with it okay? I like - LOVE - your characterization of Spock, Jim and McCoy the best. It is very close to canon and the best characterization of them in the whole fandom. Thank you, god thank you so much for sharing so many stories with us and I hope you will never stop to share Spones, Spirk or gen stories with us.

Very sweet, and an interesting take on what they would have been like had Kirk taken normal career route and not gone directly from cadet to Captain. Unless this is what happened in TOS...? Either way this is very well written and an enjoyable story. Good job all around.

It was beautiful ! Thanks for that !

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. That is all I have to say. 3

Wonderfully written. Lovely.:)

I love Kirk's ease and confidence in his lower rank, especially that natural charisma he carries. I also love how his unabashed relationship with Spock humanizes the latter in the eyes of the crew.

I love what you've done with their relationship. It's perfect.

This is such a gorgeous story. They're relationship is brilliant and beautiful. You have a way with words :D

Nice job. This story had a lot of excitement and drama, but they always got back to their love for each other.

I just loved this and the original. Absolutely lovely and beautifully written. I think I've just proved I'm a giant sap.

I loved this one as much as the first! - do continue it!