Petunia deserves to be punched not slapped

WOW. This was so seriously emotional and...touching! AWWWW...this was really an admirable piece of writing. It really moved my heart. Thanks for this.

Awwwwwww

lovely one-shot you've got here, I really liked it. lily and James are one of my favorite pairings as well. Good job!

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This is a great story, please keep up the great work.

that was great! huh, never likeed the name Vernon... why not Dave for a change?

love it it's really well interesting. For some punctuation, you could maybe ask for a beta, but no worries, the sentences aren't really confusing even if you could use a few more or less comas here and there. :)

i can't help but feel that vernon was so much like his future moron of a son in this story. You've written him in excellently.

I'm glad that lily's parents think more of james than they di of the pig - i mean Vernon.

The end of the chapter, petunia thinking of james and lily, the love they have for each other...makes you wonder doesn't it ?

Sweet. I loved the ending. Maybe you could make it less wordy?

I read this story earlier, when I was at school on my phone. I didn't review then because it's super hard to do that on a phone.

But I love it. It was sweet and slightly on the sappy side too. Perfect :)

It was hard for me to put a good basis on this as usually I take from other people's reviews and format what I like about it into it...Lily and James had a connecting relationship and I thought that was just so sweet, Petunia admits it t herself for once that Lily and James taught her something subconsciously without realising it and that just makes it seem magical...however I think you could've improved with more detail on Vernon...yeah overall not so bad!