You have my attention; I've ALWAYS been interested in stories where Fenton and Phantom; while sharing a body, are separate personalities/people. :D It's my HEADCANON! _ ... Kind makes 'The Ultimate Enemy' all the sadder/more tragic, Phantom probably felt *BETRAYED* by what Fenton and Vlad had done, Plasmeus being his enemy or no, Danny was starting to trust him, meaning PHANTOM was too; and so Phantom SNAPPED, doing ALL that horrible stuff. It wasn't Plasmeus "overwhelming him", it was a hurt/grief-stricken Phantom mentally SNAPPING, unable to take the betrayal. ;-;

Hmm this interests me :D

(for all) i EAT the weirdness

wow. it's... it's... wow.

just wow.

really good.

Oh no! Poor Danny!

Fudge. Buckets.
Buckets of fudge.
Jack: Oh goody! *lunges at the fudgy buckets and promptly devours them*

Yeahhhh... I wouldn't have the heart to tell my friends something like that either.

So welcome to my life,
As a teenage robot!
Welcome to my life,
As a teenage robot!
Teenage robot... LIFE!

...There is seriously something wrong with my brain. T_T

I LOVE this! The style your using is normally something that annoys me to no end, but the way your writing it and have the story flowing, its slowly turning into one of my favorite writing styles to read! I just love this story already so MUCH! I cannot wait to see more :D

I absolutely love this plot! It's kinda like Yugioh! I can't wait to see how this plays out! Update soon! :DDD

I really like your danny-other danny interaction. I am also glad for the change in style from the first one, rhetorical questions are cool for a prologue but they get repetitive after a while. your regular first person is so much better.

Ah, I love it! Like, really, I love it!

I have almost the complete opposite of this story. Danny and Phantom are the same soul but in seperate bodies. haha XD

Danny's narration is hilarious. I love the voice you gave him. And the (brief) interaction between him and Phantom was great; I can't wait to see how they interact further along in the story :D

I didn't notice any mistakes or anything I could help with. Sorry, I try to be helpful, I just can't find anything. Guess that means you did a good job, though, right? ;D

Can't wait to read more!

~Trance

It's good so far. Hope you will make more.

Me gusta :D, sounds like DNANGEL a bit but I love the split personality. Hahaha.:3

Wow i just love the way you write and the way Phantom acts~3! Can't wait till the next chapter ;D