Reviews for First War
Zanahoriabaila chapter 1 . 1h
Hah! This went a lot of places I was not expecting, and they where all the good kind of different.
TekoloKuautli chapter 1 . 7/11
Lily rocks! And Harry has his biological father plus many people on his side now.
Ms.Bodensee chapter 1 . 5/6
I liked it, thanks
fragonknight01 chapter 1 . 3/5
I quite like this one.
erik chapter 1 . 3/1
That works.
N Flamel chapter 1 . 11/30/2019
Very nice pacing, flow and details. Best of all was seeing the various relations between the Marauders, Lily, Petunia, and Severus. Excellent decision to have Lily defeat Voldemort, rather than Harry/Harveste. Plus, it will give Albus a nice slap to the face.
moonprincess97524 chapter 1 . 5/17/2019
love this
sarafine-ecleips chapter 1 . 4/18/2019
gginsc chapter 1 . 4/15/2019
Yayyy! Go Lily! Now she is rich and can marry someone she loves. It is a mercenary way of doing things, but I can see her point. James was not a victim. It was his idea.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/9/2019
But...The Horcruxes! He isn't dead! Voldemort shall rise again.
Sparky She-Demon chapter 1 . 1/3/2019
Oooh! I like this! Wish there was more of it!
doubledamn chapter 1 . 7/3/2018
Would have liked to see Dumble's reaction to the news, other than that, a very nice one shot.
Corwyn chapter 1 . 5/8/2017
Yeah! Badass Lily for the win!

Thanks for sharing this with us.
AyameKitsune chapter 1 . 1/29/2017
Lily is epic!
Pothangfanfic chapter 1 . 9/17/2016
This is great! I especially like how none of the characters were wildly evil (even Petunia). It's sad that Lily's parents had to die, but I was fairly certain someone would have to before the story ended.

I'd love to know what Dumbledore's take on this was. ;-)
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