Reviews for First War |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hah! This went a lot of places I was not expecting, and they where all the good kind of different. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lily rocks! And Harry has his biological father plus many people on his side now. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked it, thanks |
![]() ![]() I quite like this one. |
![]() ![]() That works. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very nice pacing, flow and details. Best of all was seeing the various relations between the Marauders, Lily, Petunia, and Severus. Excellent decision to have Lily defeat Voldemort, rather than Harry/Harveste. Plus, it will give Albus a nice slap to the face. |
![]() ![]() ![]() love this |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Yayyy! Go Lily! Now she is rich and can marry someone she loves. It is a mercenary way of doing things, but I can see her point. James was not a victim. It was his idea. |
![]() ![]() But...The Horcruxes! He isn't dead! Voldemort shall rise again. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oooh! I like this! Wish there was more of it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Would have liked to see Dumble's reaction to the news, other than that, a very nice one shot. |
![]() ![]() Yeah! Badass Lily for the win! Thanks for sharing this with us. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lily is epic! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is great! I especially like how none of the characters were wildly evil (even Petunia). It's sad that Lily's parents had to die, but I was fairly certain someone would have to before the story ended. I'd love to know what Dumbledore's take on this was. ;-) |