Fluffy, although way too cheesy after Eragon started ranting. Honestly, I was expecting a more friendship-esque story. That's what I get for not checking the story description, I guess.

Umm, he lied in the ancient language so ummm... I think those are mistakes. Also Arya seems really AU in this story. So I don't really think that the summary is actually truthful. Its seems like his is an alternative world in which the Blood Oath Ceremony took place rather then Eragon actually just going about his conversation in a less idiotic way.

That was so romantic, and I lovd the ''I don't like you, I love you'' bit

Perfect

LIKE! I have always thought that they should have been a item. Foolish Me, I have the last book (Inheritance), but I haven't read it yet, so I don't know how the Cycle ends (I've had the blasted book for AGES), I'm hopeless, lol. Thank You. TTFN

thats sweet :)

This was cute. I really enjoyed reading this.

don't worry about it being cheesy, the cheesy stories are always the best :)

Awww... You got me crying at how adorable this is!

Interesting and enjoyable, as is your writing style. Nicely done.

Regards,

Audrey

I agree, this version is MUCHOS better!

I cannot count the number of times I have read that exchange before. I say that it does not fit Arya's character.

Eragon is such a moron... I like it, even though I'm not a fan of ExA. Though I don't think Arya would express any affection for him before the war was over.

jajaja love it! jaja poor eragon XD jaja but he had a good plan endeed ;) jaja

Awesome job ! XP