Reviews for Partners |
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godess bubbles chapter 5 . 7/1/2015 Draco's reaction! |
Richardtylr chapter 5 . 3/19/2014 I like it. No cheating or slash. Just clean cut partners. |
LWJ2 chapter 5 . 6/5/2012 I enjoyed the story, may I suggest a follow-up? You've a neat little plot line here, it really deserves it. Thanks for writing and sharing this. |
missmarthanightingale chapter 5 . 12/17/2011 you should write more about their adventures as partners! brilliant story. |
bookivore chapter 5 . 7/20/2011 I possibly would have liked one more chapter to a year later where Harry's giving Astoria advice on breaking in her new partner, or they're trading baby tips, or something, and Ron is looking on in horror. Because I think you have introduction and reaction but not the whole how it worked out thing. The nod at King's Cross is not quite enough, for me. |
LightandFire chapter 2 . 6/28/2011 Wow so far! Wish i had time to read more! I will give you some advice, though! The only advice I can give really, though, is to incorporate Harry's POV a little more. He doesn't seem like him. No offense meant, of course, just want to see some inner-thinking from my favorite character of all time! Other than that, loved it to death! |
starlighttauriel chapter 5 . 6/22/2011 Why the grimace for Gin? Why would she kill Harry? |
Deleted Account Perm chapter 4 . 5/7/2011 Harry and Astoeia make good partners. |
Deleted Account Perm chapter 5 . 5/7/2011 Oh Ho Ho! I like it! Astoria and Harry are partners and good ones. This makes me happy and gives a good reason for the conclusion. |
Star1X chapter 5 . 5/7/2011 My idea is more unlike Snape, they are both mature enough to put aside school rivalries... but cool fic. |
SimFlyer chapter 5 . 5/1/2011 This is actually a very enjoyable story, chapters need to be a bit longer but other than that a very good story. Very interested to see where this goes! |
Penseln chapter 5 . 4/16/2011 Good series with a fun plot to bad they wherent longer tho. |
MidnightSapphire15 chapter 5 . 4/16/2011 Nice idea, very original. |
Naginator chapter 5 . 4/16/2011 Man I was hoping id finally be able to read a harry/astoria pairing but oh well |