| Reviews for LEGATO'S BIRTHDAY |
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   Illuminant chapter 1 . 8/2/2004 It was really good. I love legato/knives fics. |
| Miss Caribbean chapter 1 . 7/21/2004 Hmm that was cute! Nice story. _ |
| Senko Wakimarin chapter 1 . 5/20/2004 Aww how cute! You should try wriring longer stories. I can't spell either, so its cool. |
| Lady Montrose chapter 1 . 11/16/2003 Cool! your very good at English! I love the story! |
| just a wandering eye chapter 1 . 11/10/2003 Hey! I liked the fic. I was wondering about your English at first, but you did exceptionally well if it is your second language. I'm american, but I'm trying to learn Japanese and it's so hard learning another language! Anyways, if you have a spell-checker on your computer you may want to run it or something. Still a very good job. Keep writing! |
| faulted chapter 1 . 2/7/2003 On a regular basis I would say this totally sucks, but...since you have disclosed the fact that you are Italian and this is your first yaoi fanfic I greatly commend your obviously valiant efforts to make this reader-enjoyable. Your story compensates for all your spelling errors by way of a touching and interesting plot. Keep up the excellent work, author, and I hope to see more of your fanfics soon. Good look on perfecting that English of yours; I have faith in you. |
| Ca Rinoa Toki Moro Lockheart chapter 1 . 8/11/2002 Awwwww! :D Kawaii! I was lookin' for some other yaois besides WxV, and turns out, KxL is just as good! AHAHAHAHAHahahahaaaaaa...me likes! I'm a freak when it comes to spelling and grammar, but at least you have a good excuse. :) (Unlike SOME people I know...) Me likes a lot! As for Mr. Um..., he/she can just bite me! (O_o) You have a right to free expression and if he/she doesn't like yaoi, why read it? |
| uh chapter 1 . 4/5/2002 What is so interesting about yaoi anyways? I really want to know. |
| me chapter 1 . 4/4/2002 cool, write more |
| suwati chapter 1 . 4/3/2002 ...you must write more...please! great fic very good ) |
| me the fan chapter 1 . 4/1/2002 AWESOME¡ This is truly a fic to remember, so simple and so well written and soooo sweet. there is hardly a thing like this in the Knives/Legato fandom, but you make it enjoyable and beliavable. Congrats¡ |
| katsa5 chapter 1 . 3/30/2002 A sweet Knives/Legato Fic? That's a gem; a real ruby. Not many of those, ya' know. (Yawwn) its too late to give good review, so sorry. But I'm saying this; it was sweet, man, you weren't lying. Not at all bad for a first fic, I give it a 9.2. (Don't spread this around, but you have better English than a lot of the people I know). My only complaint is, around the middle, What happened? There's enough to guess, so its not a flaw. It's just a teeny bit akward. |
