So. Awesome. Poignant. Emotions. Ughhhhhhh love it all

Really glad I found this, a pleasure to read something so well-written :D
Pre-sex prostate orgasms? Yes, yes and yes :3
Delicious :P And a happy ending! :D

That was utterly delicious. At first I wasn't too keen on the present tense, but I found it really refreshing by the end. I also really enjoyed how in character Balthier's speech was. This was a really great fic! 3

Lovely story! I am greatly intrigued by this picture you paint. I love Vaan's shamelessness and Balthier's ego. And don't worry, the porn was more than just 'good.' It was 'open-a-window, damn-I-need-a-cigarette' good. Just sayin'.

Vaan Whoresbane, pffftt haha (I snorted my beverage).

And finally, I love the emotional connection! Very Pretty Woman... except Vaan as a cross-dressing prostitute is so much more appealing, and gaaahhh Balthier and his "Let me come inside you." I wibbled.

That was, to be perfectly honest, a marvelous story, and one that I enjoyed greatly. I found the idea of Vaan as a prostitute to be remarkably intriguing, and the ending of Balthier taking him on as his concubine was great. The grammar was lovely, too, something that is not seen often enough. Thank you so much for writing it!

Amazing story and fantastic writing.

You. Are. Awesome. :) This was fan-freaking-tastic, i just loved it all. Vaan in a dress. Balthier. Fran. Penelo. The contract! You did amazing and I am super jealous :)

ooo very nice! I hope you make a sequel!

I certainly hope that this fanfic was well-received. It was so much better than I expected it to be. XD

This was amazing! You captured Balthiers personality perfectly, (and his vocabulary haha). At first I wasn't sure I liked the idea of Vaan in a dress, but it worked with the story so I can't complain. I can't think of what else to say apart from, I loved this fanfiction

u should write more to this i loved it and wish there to be more

Damn, that was hot! O_O *faves* beautiful writing, spot on characters, and steamy smut. I LOVED IT!

This is wonderful. I really love the way you write, and the descriptions were absolutely fantastic. The concept is interesting, and I can really imagine this happening in-game (best opening scene EVAR.) I can't really think of much more to say other than I really enjoyed reading this!

I loved this! It's been forever since someone has posted a story on Balaan. :D Continue it, I don't know how, but just continue ittt! :)

Tender, surprising, romantic.

Lovely writing.