Wow!

This was lovely! It was short and sweet, and, yet, so meaningful. I loved the last line...it really seemed to sum up Ginny's feelings.

You've painted a lovely picture in my head once again. :)

I'm a little bit in love with this.

Because in the end, if I keep waiting and waiting and waiting... you may just turn this into a story. Or at least a scene?

Please, please, please?

This could be a famous poem, it's that amazing. Awesome job!

WT,

That was sooo sweet. And soooo Ginny.

Thanks,

FoM

Why do you write so fantastically? Even though that was incredibly short, it was so sweet I couldn't stop reading it over and over and over and over again!

Please keep writing,

~Cand

This story is awesome! Even if it IS short. You make short fluffs (REALLY short fluffs) awesome!

Very nice job! There's a lot of power in that little piece! :)

Lovely! Great job. It's amazing how much power so few words can have. Keep up the good work. :)

This was amazing. "your chest heaves a breath and your fingers curl around mine and your heart beats to life and your bright eyes snap open and look at me -" I literally lost my breath with that line. You should get this published.