Man i love this story

I see someone in the rewiews did not get subtext. Toji hit Shinji because the later got into a relatív ship with his younger sister.

I seriously like your stories, especially since you use some crossover materiális i do not see often. I have only two issues. 1 you sometimes switch up names. And 2 sometimes you have typos that look like the words written phonetically. And you consistently spell too to.

This is nothing but harem trash. And why so many writers like having toji beat up on his beat friend? It like y'all never watch the damn series saw that the two know how to get along whit out being violent? Getting to the point I can't stand eva fics.

I like the story but it just doesn’t grab attention. It doesn’t keep you riveted. Just too much going on, too many time skips, too much repetition, and too much filler. Not enough actual story.
Don’t get me wrong you’re a great writer and while I haven’t written anything of substance in years, I wanted to share my opinion.
Good job and keep writing

Another solid and fun story. Kind of wrapped up pretty quick at the end. Wish there was a Shinji Asuka moment but the scenes she had we're pretty good.

Great work.

I know nothing of those other 2 anime but a quick Google search shows me how hot the 2 characters you added are. So I'm in.

Good story. The final fight was a bit short, but still, well done.

I think Shinji has had enough time to build the confidence to no longer stutter. I really hope that peters off in the next few chapter - it is really eye rolling level of annoying.

An interesting combination of source material and, as you stated in the AN, the two introduced characters are keeping IN-character as per they would from their own sources.

I remember watching both of those other animes but had pretty much forgotten they existed until the names were dropped and by that point you had me hooked.

I really want to see where you go with this.

Aaaaand I'm done. Finally.

I like it better when your fic have smaller chapters... Anyway:

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I would also like to see a fic where you tackle every single one of the Angels instead of plot points stopping you at Leliel.

Poor Misato suffered so much in this... not to mention she took to long to warm up to Chizuru...

Ritsuko on the other hand had good pay off to the suffering, due to how happy her ending was.

Other then that this was a very enjoyable read. Good job. Hard to say if it was better then the gift... I missed me some Misato Shinji, the gift had a lot of that. Both this and 'the gift' were good.

Which is why I'm moving on to your other current Eva fic, no alternative. See you then.

just this one and then another one on the final chapter. It's nice catching up to this.

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On the plus, I like how you progress the relationships between the characters. You even work out the details of Shinji having a harem within the minds of the girls too. That actually improved since 'the gift'. How Kuesu found her way in and how Chizuru accepted the thing while fighting off the curruption was well done. I also loved how the girls of SHinji's harem are starting to accept one another as well. I'm also wondering how the whole thing with Toji and Tayura are gonna go down. Very good read.

On the down, these huge chapters are kind of hard to sit through in one swoop... especially for those who found the story only klater on like me... maybe you should go for no more than 9k words per chapter...

Gonna keep reading now.

Man I'm still at chapter 11? This is taking longer than I thought...

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Still enjoying it though, I don't think I'm taking longer because this story is weaker than the others from I read or something. Still wanna see what happens. Especially with Rei and Saku. Is he really Yui's brother? Is Rei really a freaky hybrid? Gotta keep reading to find out.

finally got to reading this. Faving to keep reading it through the end so I can move on to 'no alternative' like I said.

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