Reviews for Fight on Undaunted
Nurisiliel chapter 21 . 7/7
I... don't really know how to begin my review... I love how you wrote Godric's and Eric's history together and that their togetherness grew over time and they didn't jump on each other right after Eric's turning like in other stories. I could feel the love they have for each other out of your words! That made me cry even harder at the end of chapter 20. It is strange but I can understand why Godric choose to meet the sun. Nevertheless it is more than cruel thinking about Eric and his feelings for his maker. Yes he is of his blood and therefore Godric will always be by his side but it is a difference when you can't touch someone you love because this person is physically not by your side.
After chapter 20 I wanted to stop reading but said to myself that it is just one more chapter... Well, reading it made my cry even more! I'm so emotional right now that Godric would scold me endlessly.
I don't really know if I wish for more chapters but the truth is that I hate unfinished stories. So please, if you can overcome your writer's block, please continue your story. There are so many questions that need an answer. And I really hope that your Godric can find peace whether being alive (so to speak) or true dead.
Lots of love from Germany
Susa
Guest chapter 21 . 7/14/2018
Hope this story gets finished som day. It's very good.
Guest chapter 17 . 7/10/2018
This is a masterpiece. It gives me so much joy to read it. Thank you. :)
Guest chapter 15 . 7/9/2018
Love it.
Guest chapter 14 . 8/24/2017
Pam is awsome. And you are an amazing writer. This story is one of the best I've ever read.
Guest chapter 13 . 8/12/2017
Beautiful.
Guest chapter 12 . 8/10/2017
It's so beautiful and wonderful and it is just such an amazingly, beautifully written and intriguing story.
Guest chapter 11 . 8/9/2017
Love it.
Guest chapter 10 . 8/8/2017
You write them and their relationship beatifully.
Guest chapter 9 . 8/7/2017
I wonder why Eric didn't smell that it was Godric's hand earlier. Also shouldn't he have been able to tell ( by hearing or smell) that the werewolves were in the building before Ginger screamed.
Still a great story though. :)
Guest chapter 8 . 8/7/2017
This is perfect. So beautiful.
Guest chapter 7 . 8/7/2017
This is one of my all time favourite storys. It was when I first red it, and it still is several years later.
Guest chapter 6 . 8/7/2017
Amazing story.
Guest chapter 5 . 8/7/2017
This is beautifully written. I like how you go from past to present.
Guest chapter 4 . 8/5/2017
The chapture the characters perfectly. Even Ginger. They feel very realistic and in character.
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