Love it

i absolutely love Stargirl and i do wish that what you wrote had been the ending of the book, but i wouldn’t change the book at all even if i had the chance but i love that gave me my wish to see leo and stargirl happy in the way that i had wanted them to be while i read the book. this is probably one of the most amazing alternate endings i’ve read for any book. thank you!

Omg that is so amazing! You should totally be a writer!

Beautiful. I love the description of the "tiny hole", and the scene with Archie.

Beautiful ending.

Ha! In your face, Jerry Spinelli! You can't stop your fans from writing their own happy ending!

Thanks so much for this story. Love this alternate end.

Wonderfully written! I would have very much preferred it if this was the ending of stargirl, with of course more elaboration. The best stargirl fanfiction i have read so far. Keep up the good work and dont let go of your talent for writing!