PLEASE continue and what is Jareth's plans for Hermione now?

An interesting crossover exploration. I like how you've replaced a bunch of the Labyrinth characters with lost wizards. I am a little surprised that Cedric is the only one to have joined the party besides the Black brothers, but with the three of them they are the same number of companions as Sarah had. I'm also a little worried about who was speaking to Hermione at the end.

Please please please come back to the story it is getting real good. This is super good hope to read more soon

Your right, it is kinda short, but still good anyway
Please update again soon

PT

I love the fact you took key elements from the Labyrinth and twisted it to fit Potter Characters inside, a very interesting idea. I cannot wait to see more. If you need help with brain storming, let me know. XD I'm more than willing to help inspire some ideas.

Wanda

Panhandling and threatening to withhold story for reviews is never attractive or persuasive...

Nice idea but spoiled by the cutesy-poo little self-referential, friendspotting asides. Real writers don't do that. I'm outta here.

this chapter is ABSOLUTLY wonderful and has made my day. I'm glad that your feeling a bit better now, and, even though I'm just some anounamous person with a key board, I support you 100% and hope that you can live the best and happiest life possible.

This is not a bad fic. The one's who are enjoying it are sick and tired of these notes. Stop it, for gods sake!

The reason your not getting that many reviews is because your story is to wonderful for words. I know that it's easy said than done but...WRITE THIS FAST! I wanna know what happens. MEGA plus on useing Cedric there, but I am very upset that there is no one in Yodo's place. Althogh I do understand the dificulty of finding someone to fit the role. Hmmmm...maybe...Collin?... Tonks?...Quirell? The last seems to be the most likely but...

wonderful touch at the end there, merlin being jareth's father, classic :)

I wish it had snowed last halloween, I was in the full hogwarts uniform(as hermione of course). Oh well, I do live in south texas

I don't stalk you, you told me all of that out of your own free wil

Story's not bad. Your characterization of Hermione could be better, but it's not outside the realm of possibility. Unfortunately, you also have almost constant, tiny grammar mistakes and you insert author's notes in the middle of the story (the latter of which is not only irritating, but against 's rules). We're reading for the /story/, not your commentary. Because of these two things-which happen to be major pet peeves of mine-I had to stop reading a few paragraphs in to chapter 2.

I do think this story has potential (at least, what I've seen of it), and it you fix it up and maybe get a beta (or a better beta, because if you already have one, then they're not doing their job) I would enjoy reading this story all the way through.

Good chapter.