Its so sad, it hurts

cassie you made me cryy.

TTTT

i shall nvr forget that! i'm holding it upon your head.

new collab acc name: cassiemadexenacry. LOLOLO jkjk

but this was awesome.

Sasuke was WAAAY ooc, especially near the end. The bit where he was crying? It was a tad bit too dramatic.

But the way you have written the story weas readable, and enjoyable as well. Short and sweet, and to the point. Even with the ooc-ness, you managed to pull it off. But then again, since it seems that the story takes place in AU, I guess the characterization do not have to entirely be canon. And if you consider Sasuke to have an independent personality from the one he has in the manga, then the oocness is okay.

I especially liked the Sakura bit, how she kept cool, and how she stood up for what she believed. And the protective Neji bit was neat.

Overall, one of the very few (if only) recently published GOOD fanfic I have read.

_ now I'm gonna go plough through your profile for the rest of your fics ~

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Wow DX

Deep.

But.

Keep it going? (Even though you say it's completd?)