Drunk Hiroki is adorable! XD

And talk much and honest much!

and have wild insecure thought much...

but i LOVE IT!

hehehe I love drunk peolple

Hahaha awww so cute! drunk hiro-san hahaha I loved it

_I think it's cute, sad, happy, and hilarious! That's what I think when I'm reading..it's sad 'coz of Hiroki missing Nowaki...cute when Hiroki was asking if they'll have sex..in his delirious state...happy 'coz Nowaki is very understanding...and! Hilarious! I find it funny when he's drunk and all tipsy saying what's on his delirious mind..yeah..that is all...Ü

Pretty good as your first. Good job! I just wished it was longer, haha.

I LOVED THIS STORY! This was so sweet and funny. You captured Hiroki and Nowaki brilliantly. Oh poor Hiroki, but I love it when he's drunk. I noticed you haven't been on the site in a while but I would really be thrilled if you could do a follow-up...maybe the morning after ;)

Guh. This was lovely. Great work!

Oh I enjoyed this one. It's very much in character and you did have a plot and it's very focused till the end. Very enjoyable read.

GAHH i am SUCH a sucker for drunk!Hiroki stories :D and this is one of the best ones I've read _ characterization is spot on! Love the prideful but insecure Hiro so much, and how he's still annoyed by grammatical errors when he's tipsy XD And Nowaki is just so damn lovable :) But still, Hiroki! *flails*

Love this part: ' "That means we're going to go home and have lots of sex, right?"' XDD

and: 'Stupid alcohol, making him feel all fluffy and affectionate. He really had to stop drinking. Bad things always happened when he did - like getting BL novels written about him.'

:D looking forward to reading more from you!

WONDERFUL FIC! LOVE IT!

I have just added your story to my favorites. A wonderful way to break into fanfiction. So many great elements, the text conversation was a delightful detail. The pacing and balance between tenderness and humor was super. Also kept everyone wonderfully in character.

Thanks for making my day, I'm still smiling even now.

Good Lord, this is your first JR fic? Goddamn, I'm jealous of yo skillz. D:

Really, though, it was incredibly impressive. First of all, I woke my family up from laughing so hard (seriously; I'm still giggling as I type.) You're great with pacing and description, and your dialog was top-notch.

My favorite thing about this, however, was the characterization (and you were worried they were OOC, you silly monkey.) The problem with this fandom is that they're blind to the fine line between cute and embarrassing, but you, dear, knew very well of how to do it right. Nowaki is kind and thoughtful, like always, without being too affectionate (or, for that matter, sexually devious, which is another problem with fandom's characterization of Nowaki; seriously, I can't tell you how happy I was when Nowaki refused the sex, which is what any realistic, committed partner would do.) And you fully took advantage of Hiroki's innebriation to reap the pure asdfghjkl of the situation without going too over-the-top.

So, all in all, pat yourself on the back for me, because this is a truly splendid addition to our collection of works, and I hope to see your name around more often. 8D You have a happy spring now, alright? Anon out.

You're saying this is your 1st JR? NO WAY!

Then I can't wait for the 2nd :D You have to continue with sequel to this one can't wait

LOVE this fic. You've got every character just so right! It's super sweet & fluffymy fav

Although I would love having some teary emotional Hiroki but the angry one is nice, long as he spouts some embarrassing stuff XD

Heey!

Oh, my, congratulations! This was so damn funny! I really can't stop laughing!

Really, congratulations! Loved it!

Add to my favorites!

Mafe Ly

I really, really enjoyed this!

There aren't enough drunken Hiroki stories around (actually, this is the first one I've read...) and this was just so believable and absolutely adorable that I was extremely disappointed when it ended.

So, fantastic job!

I'm reeeallly looking forward to reading more from you!