Okay this was awesome-I ended up not commenting on several of the middle chapters because I was reading so breathlessly! Loved every second of it though. The whump (yissss), the character voices (Bobby especially felt so on point), the case, the tension and the pacing, all of it!

Okay now I'm super intrigued-this case keeps getting weirder and weirder!

LOL "a curious cocktail of inbreeding and type 2 diabetes" :-p

Although this turned dark fast (yay!).

Loved the motel room numbering :D Another great chapter-I'm glad it's all done, I would've hated to be on the edge of my seat waiting for the next update!

Super compelling start! I don't know why you didn't like this chapter-I thought it was just as engaging and interesting as the first one. To top it off, I'm a Jersey girl, so this is especially fun for me 3

Awesome story, great job. Loved it

Xfiles and supernatural 3 I got so giddy upon reading that little scene. I had no idea how much I needed that. Thank you!

Thank you so much for writing this! It was suspense from beginning to end! The plot and action scenes had me reading too fast before my mind registered the words! What a ride!

Oh and I loved Dean's fever scenes ha! Can't help it!

Thank you so much for sharing :)

Hi I am a new reader and I love ur angsty stories. Who doesn't like a handsome guy being injured/ hurt/ sick? Haha...

Just to point out one thing though.. actually people with fevers do not sweat. Perspiration is a way the body removes heat. That's why those who are unable to sweat becomes feverish. Once the fever is broken then they get sweaty.

Hope to read more of ur angsty stories !

Oh my god! This story was amazing! Excellent! This story much have taken a lot of work and research. Seriously I loved it! I love hurt!Dean. Keep doing what you do best:)

I loved your story and there wasn't one thing that I could complain about:)

yeah, I thought about the x-files right away and then I saw you mentioned it, too - funny:)

This is one of the best fan fictions I've read, it captures their personality perfectly, and it's very captivating !

This story is just awesome! LOL It's very late and I should be sleeping, but I had to finish reading it, it was way too good to wait! *_*

And with the episode this week, which will be about the Devil (at least, if the preview is right LOL) it just became even more perfect! D

Kisses and congratulations on the amazing story!

Rosetta

This was a great ending! I loved all the hurt Dean, but I really liked how you still had Dean be Dean, not a whimpering pile of clingy mush that a lot of other fanfic authors do. Don't get me wrong, I love the mush, but it's refreshing to have a story that would be pretty realistic in the boys' world. ; ) Awesome job! I also really loved the ending. Dean's words finally bite him in the ass! ; D Hilarious! Casn't wait for more great stories from you!