I wish there was like a epilogue to tie things off. I am happy it came to a somewhat ending.

I'm only on chapter 3 and this is absolutely fantastic! The summary doesn't come CLOSE to giving it justice. I was slightly worried, only because I personally have a hard time reading about abusive relationships. However when I started reading, I couldn't stop. I adore how you take the time to explain and go into depth of each individual character. Not just focusing on the main ones, but going into depth about everyone and how it all ties together. Or even going so far to explain enough information about Roxanne that we feel how trapped she is and the almost pity she feels for Metro man.

You are an excellent writer. I don't know why I haven't found this sooner, but I'm so glad I found it now.
I will most likely leave another review at the end of the story!

Bad To Be Goodf

Wow.

I know what's it's like with losing motivation and interest in a story ,( looking over at several boxes filled with unfinished stories and fics) but do keep trying to work on the story, if it helps try working on it on paper, try writing down what you want to happen in the chapter and leave it for a bit if need be, then come back and add something if you get any ideas. Just try going back to work on it every once in awhile so eventually it'll be done.
Personally I think a bit of the chapter should have them in prison. Is the Warden's prison rebuilt after the damages that were caused to it? Will the love birds be sent there? If so I think that Blue should make a deal with him so he can see and talk to Roxanne every once in a while , like " I'll make you a deal Warden. If you let me see and speak to Roxanne once a week for at least half an hour I'll behave, most of the time. " "most of the time? " " well if a riot or something like what Metro man did happens in block D and I find out , I'll likely brake out of my cell to make sure that Roxanne is ok. "
Will we see Megamind transforming into more of a good guy? Does he have and money that he legitimately earned from inventions from when he was a kid like in some of the other fics? Will Megamind ,after he and Roxanne gets out of prison, become an inventor and doing a little bit of superheroing on the side? Will Roxy get her job back or will she have to find another? Will she move in with Megamind and Minion later on?
Will Wayne help with getting to public to not hate our jailbirds duo?
Perhaps this will help some. I'll be waiting to read the next chapter.

Am I the only one who is thinking that in this Roxanne is Harley to Megamind's Joker? Or slightly reversed. And minus nearly all the craziness and evil.

This is a lot darker than I was expecting it to be. I can't stop reading.

I've read quite a few fics where they use Wayne as his first name.
I was debating with myself about if I wanted to read this story but my imagination started on possibilities of how this'll go so I had to find out how this goes.

This fic is the the most unique take on their romance that i have seen so far.A real done!

I just read all of your chapters and my god I loved it! I was watching megamind today and I was like... this would be a great FanFiction. So i looked it up and found EXACTLY what I was looking for! So awesome man!

whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat.
This is singlehandedly the best fic on the megamind ff archive and you're letting the measly force of faulty technology stop you!? Yes, I realize that it's been four to five years and you've probably stopped caring about this, but COME ON!
WITH THE AWESOME SAUCE BRAIN THAT MADE THIS FIC, NOTHING SHOULD BE ABLE TO STAND IN YOUR WAY!1!
Ehem. What I meant to say is that I very much like your story, and have you considered doing the whole editing process on paper and then copying the final result up to ?
Or alternatively, you could just say "okay kiddies, show's over, this fic is done!"
Maybe you had more planned but if it doesn't leave you with such a sense of regret, I think that the end of the last chapter was a pretty solid conclusion. The stuff that needed to be said got said, and the main conflict was resolved. There are nearly no loose ends and it's relatively easy for the reader to tie up whichever ones they find.
One question though, did the red headed guy who turned into titan in the movie not appear in the comics? Since you were basing yourself mostly off of the written canon and wrote not a word of his existence, that's what i'm guessing.
Of course, if it's just repugnance of his character, I don't fault you.
Have a nice day!
And no kidding, your writing kicks ass. I wish I could personally thank all the people who helped you with this story.
XD

You might find google docs/drive find handy if you don't have word as it has a spell checker. All you have to do is to create an Gmail account and you automatically get google docs with it both of which are free. Plus its a great place to back up all your work so you don't lose as it as it continually saves what ever your working on without having to hit the save button. You can also up load documents you already have saved to your computer allowing you to access them on google drive. Might be something for you to consider if you don't have access to or can't afford word.

This fic could have ended satisfactorily with chapter 10, to my mind. The primary conflict has been resolved, the heroes are out of danger, and there's a brighter future ahead of them. I can't see this story having more than one or two more chapters...but, of course, I am not the author.

Yeah I get what you mean about Windows 8 and opening Docs in Wordpad and not having Microsoft Office 365 and all the rest. I have Windows 10 which is almost better than the best older one, 7, and I can tell you from my own experience it's much better than 8. Love the story and how things have turned out so far! Hoping for an update whenever you re-interest yourself in the story again (trust me I know how that works).

Wow, and I literally mean, WOW THIS STORY IS AWESOME and it quite frankly is keeping me up at 1:05 on Friday night/Saturday morning. Hard to believe watching Megamind once again since a very long time could get me obsessed with looking for good fanfictions to read. And I thought I was this crazy about Star Wars. The only thing I have to say is when you said "intellectual DUELS" you spelled it wrong and said, "duals". With everything else I can't complain. It's "too fantastic", according to a certain blue friend disguised as an intellectual dweeb we all know... LOL this is one of the fics that actually gets you to THINK... LOVE IT!