Reviews for Can't Be Alone |
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CocoaBean chapter 1 . 8/1/2019 When you wish you could write a story with emotions and not feel like it's a wild animal ready to tear open your belly and shred your organs like ground beef in a blender. |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/1/2019 This ending was perfect |
Dossypet chapter 1 . 5/6/2017 That ending was fantastic! |
RobinTheLivingShadow chapter 1 . 4/18/2017 This is amazing! I loved how in detail you went with Robin's little panic attack. I did notice however that you sometimes would go into too much detail but it is only a minor thing. Keep doing what you're doing and like the shadows it is time for me to disappear |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/7/2017 Really well written! |
Dratias chapter 1 . 4/9/2016 Wow this was good. Very nice job on Wally's POV. Loved the DaddyBats moment.. So sweet. |
CuzI'mBatman chapter 1 . 8/18/2015 Shoulda called this old wounds lol |
MiyuIsihami chapter 1 . 6/7/2015 Sooooo cute, poor dick |
PainInSilence chapter 1 . 6/1/2014 Good story...good story... |
Zen04 chapter 1 . 3/25/2014 Great job please do more although you don't have to because ending it here is good too |
BrienneJamie chapter 1 . 5/29/2013 OMG! I love it! |
Wintress chapter 1 . 12/30/2012 Batman was capable of feelings? He was capable of having emotions? well he's not Red Tornado |
xXxMidnightsMelodyxXx chapter 1 . 7/12/2012 Aw poor Robin. He has a dark past and he just wants to make sure Bruce is okay. |
wiz-witch in training chapter 1 . 3/30/2012 Ah, gotta love those midnight plot bunnies...I should be writing that, shouldn't I?\ ... "He had already finished off seven hundred and thirty-eight robots" Impressive. Robin: Hey, would the opposite of "impressive" be "pressive"? ...Unimpressive. That's the opposite. ... "He had already beaten the console's high score twice for the day." Again: impressive. ... "sounding more like a whimper of a puppy who had just been brutally kicked in the chest and was sent sprawling across the floor only to hit a wall" Aw! ... "from hitting the concrete after being thrown out of a second story window" ...Wow...That kid...Just...wow... ... "Then, figuring Robin was alright" ...Right, because the description in the paragraph above is the definition of "alright". *eye roll* ... "It was like trying to take food from a dog: taking the wrong approach means you lose a finger." How bad is it that I think Robin's more dangerous than the dog? ... "Of course, his nightmares were about the world running out of cheese" ...That's so Wally. Wally: Hey! Well it is. ... "Batman was capable of feelings? He was capable of having emotions?" Don't forget, Batman's human. Muse: Coming from the girl who thought that Batman wasn't- Don't bring that up. ... "They were just hashing at old wounds." Nice metaphor-type thing there. |
PrincessLazyPants chapter 1 . 2/19/2012 You know, at first I thought that the description of Wally's videogames were just that. Pointless description for the readers to visualize the entire surrounding. However, that last sentence - my favorite sentence - brought it all together. I absolutely loved how you ended this story with the robots hashing at old wounds. It definitely fitted the story wonderfully. :) |