genius!~~~~~~

AWESOME AND SO HOT

This was mildly hilarious. Suzaku was very possessive, which I'm not used to, but it suits his character though. It was a great fic, and written well. I was amused at some parts, especially when Lelouch talked about Rivalz's aversion to homo-relationships, rotfl. This was great! Thank you for sharing it. _

*squeals* You are the one author in this fandom that I can always count on to make me happy! This fic was life, love, and liberty. :) Seriously, I found this too cute. The fact that Suzaku was so jealous over Rivalz and Lelouch's relationship almost made me melt.

Seriously, well done Author-chan! xD
Loved it,
~Fire

You are one great SuzaLulu FanFiction writer! I really want the theme of this story! Can you please write more possessive Suzaku with Lelouch totally being his? They're just sweet and sexy. Thank you!

Lulu is such a lusty little thing xD he is cute and sexy, poor Suzaku, really, to have to watch for him :p

Thank you for thie one shot, I love it :D

I love possessive Suzaku :3 This story is really awesome, you're really good at writing smut /

I love this story so much!

I loved this story so much!

Rivalz hadn't seen that coming. Of course he hadn't!
I wouldn't expect Suzaku-san to be so... predacious too... and he's possessive. good. at least he understood how dangerously attractive Lelouch is...
And I wonder what was that "nearly disastrous" event in the shower.
And the thought of Suzaku "marking his territory" made me laugh. on my chair. and then suddenly i was on the floor.

That was hot. Thanks for awesome fic w

Omg I can't. The phrases "mine" and "yours" will always make me think of your fanfiction. I think your perfect writing and depiction of this couple made me love them more than I ever would've imagined

The little detail that caught my attention in the beginning - and which made me appreciate the thought you obviously put into even your porn fics - was the mention that Britannian currency is in pounds as opposed to dollars, or even yen (since, y'know Area Eleven is Japan and might still have a different market, like Britian controlled India, and I am totally putting too much thought into this, aren't I?) It's not an important detail, but it shows an investment of thought into the world and makes immersion (and thus, the escapism of the porn) easier.
As for the rest of the fic - the beginning plays for a pretty good laugh once Suzaku goes seme on both Lelouch and Rivalz, and having the dialogue written the way it was plays for good drama, good comedy, AND is neither forced nor contrived and totally in character. I could actually hear the voice actors (from the dub, admittedly, but still) saying these lines, until Suzaku and Lelouch start making out (but I can never hear voice actors making porny sound effects unless they've actually been in hentai anime, so, whaddya gonna do?)
Also… oddly enough, the way that the sex scene itself is written, Suzaku comes across as that perfect line between dominant-but-hot and dominant-possessive-and-scary - as though you could have changed the ending to have his reason being that he'd found out about Zero, and it would fit just as well, AND the mood would still work. That's hard to do. My only criticism would be that maybe Lelouch is a little… too passive. Like, have him enjoy himself, of course, but since he wonders in the beginning whether Suzaku's figured out that he's Zero, have him contemplate for a little bit longer how to play the game to his advantage, or at least get out of there… right before deciding it's safe to relax and go along with the sex (but that's a NITPICK, at best. Says something about the strength of the rest of the fic) Still great, still love this.

I seriously can't get enough of this story. It's smexy, but with just the right amount of sweetness to make it absolutely irresistible.

Dammit, I fucking love this possessiv Suzaku! *_*
Good Job!
AC