Not necessarily for this chapter, but I loved that you added the dynamic (friendship) between Oliver and Hal in the story. And you did it so well; disappointed that your account is no longer active.

This has to be one of my all time favorites for flirty banter. Love it.
I just wish you'd written an introduction between Green Arrow and Superman.

Love how you worked the "Sidekick" nickname into the story as that scene in season 6 where he first calls her Sidekick is one of my favorite moments because I absolutely love the banter between them. Chloe is one of my favorite characters (and not just out of the characters on this show) because I love how snarky and sassy she can be.

Loved it! Seriously, it was so cute! They are OTP for me. Awesome job!

hi I read your story on a go and it was funny, nice, hot and extremely coherent.
I loved it.
you definitely understood perfectly the chemistry between your characters and your story is really enjoyable to read.
nice work and I hope stop here

I absolutely loved this. Really well written. Loved the universe and your depiction of Chlollie.

Good story. I found the chat between reeeally cute. Just wanted more interactions with Chloe knowing he's GA.

Great story, i really enjoyed it!

Hey great story! Good pace not extremely long chapters and good cliffhangers even if not intended and really really great character understanding even if yes Chloe should have realized it from start but that doesn't botter me for the same reasons you said...and love the dreams that Chloe had with both of them hahaha...and LOVE HAL! It was a great addition and not everybody does it because he is not in the show...

I know that it's complete the story...that mostly the reason I started reading...hate when I have to wait ages for an update...but have you though about a sequel? Maybe adding Lois/Clark romance...and some more Hal and the great adventures of Chloe and Ollie? I really liked your writing like I said before and the pace you follow so...maybe you have something more written haven't check just started this yesterday and now I just had to finished it...and it's 2am hahahah

Anyways great story...keep the good work...

Love it!

Good story, is there a sequel or spin off to it.

Great fic
:)

Damn that was a great story!

Awesome, enough said! I thought I was not going to like this because it did not focus on her powers or anything like that but I really really enjoyed the straight up romance.

Fun story