I like this, a lot. It says a lot without really mentioning much.

"You saved my life," the redhead says tightly.

It's just a statement; nothing else. No 'thank you'. Because that's not Jenny.

Just my favourite line.

I like your take on their background.

Aw always, beautiful. This really captures the friendship Jenny and Ziva had.

Great idea for a fic. Very good fic.

This is...you know I'm not quite sure what to say to this. Lol. But it is interesting, and I like it XD good work!