| Reviews for Falling |
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  Guest chapter 9 . 7/17/2014 cool story |
 ArohaTinkerbellIGOT7 chapter 6 . 7/11/2014 Hahaha it's his father that isn't particularly find of him? Haha that's funny. |
| jaspersmate81 chapter 9 . 9/23/2013 Really cute and different story. I like how she's a different mythological creature that I've never heard of. The inclusion of the dragons is cool too. The story is a little confusing but I do like it a lot and hope that you would continue it. Keep up the awesome work. |
| Ghoul99 chapter 9 . 5/12/2012 It's good so far |
| the newest daughter chapter 2 . 7/15/2011 i like it but im still a little lost |
| HeLlHoUnD555 chapter 9 . 6/27/2011 they should get together |
| SkylerBlack chapter 9 . 6/25/2011 another great chapter. and as for your poll, i think u should have jasper n bella get together offically and stay together. myb have bella try n pull away but have jasper be a stuborn S.O.B and not let her. lol update soon ! ! |
| SkylerBlack chapter 8 . 6/20/2011 woot another chapter yaay lol. great job it was awesome, they kissssed wooooooh. cant wait for more, watch out for the sentances there were a few missing words here n there but other then that great job. update soon update update update! |
| HeLlHoUnD555 chapter 7 . 6/20/2011 i thought the story so far was very interesting i cant wait for the next chapter to come out so plzzz start updating as soon as possible ur new #1 fan HeLlHoUnD555 |
| wendy1969 chapter 8 . 6/20/2011 I don't see why she has to do what she gets told. is she not a young adult? is she such a child that she could never make decisions? Oh and as for the brother, he was stupid hiding in the first place. if he had of let himself be known, things would not have ended up like they did then. I reckon Jasper needs to just cut his losses and walk. The poor guy should not be made to feel like he done wrong when he tried to protect her then. she isnt even going to accept Jasper as her mate by the way Peter talks. so why even bother. he is only going to suffer BUT, that is just my opinion. not like i remember what all has happened in the story. this is the first up date since you know when:) so anyway, thanks for updating |
| yunadustrial.twifan chapter 8 . 6/20/2011 this is pritty good so far. i think its interesting how youve put a loud of other mystical reatures in the mix |
| the newest daughter chapter 1 . 5/14/2011 i am intrigude |
| MarveyTibbsMcGarrettWilliams chapter 7 . 5/7/2011 3 it! 33333333 |
| vampirefairy09 chapter 7 . 4/26/2011 Awesome, please write more soon. I cant wait to see what happens next. |
| Lil-B-Rebel chapter 7 . 4/23/2011 ooooo k cnt wait for u to update this story loving it x |
