FINALLY! I miss this story! Its so good! And this chapter was way cool! Cant wait for more! :D

Loved it! The idea is original and other than a few typos and grammatical errors here and there it's well written. Can't wait to see where you take it next!

KrC

why would we be mad at you? i thought it was a great chapter! update soon cause i cant wait to see what happens. :)

I liked this chapter. its getting me really curious. update soon cause i love this story!

love this story update soom please

Yes! They are going to rescue them now! This story is so cool and I love the way you word things. Update soon and maybe we could find out what's going on with Clay too cause I miss the cowboy! Can't wait for more and poor Rai and his injuries! Update asap!

Ah this is so crazy! im really liking this and its so mysterious! i cant wait for an update but i feel like i need to remind you that in some one your sentences your mentioning that Clay is with them but he's captured! just wanted you to make sure you knew you were putting down an unseen character! haha but still loved the chapter mucho grande! :D

Okay first of all calm down! Everyone has there time to be lazy and not update for a really long time! I loved this chapter and it just opened a lot more mytery so update as soon as you can! and since your forcing yourself to update even though you have exams i'll make sure i update too cause i dont even have an excuse at all!

O_O

"I pretty much think I screwed up the whole deal and per total…" FUCK NO, nu ai facut asa ceva, nu ! deci aici ai gresit-o .

"…I'm not proud of this chapter!" AR TREBUI SA FII .

scuze ca tot dau quotations cu ce ai scris inafara chapterului dar pur si simplu mai enervat -.-'

so, fave part a fost cea in care ai descris cum se transforma Rai *-* mi sa parut super tare, pur si simplu parca era in fata mea si se tranforma *-*

esti epica, GO ON, CONTINUA CA TE BAAAT .

si cant wait for the other one with Sonic to be written 3

I liked this chapter. It was interesting to read about two animals fighting really and it makes raimundo all that much cooler haha! but seriously update soon cause i want more action haha!

Love, love, loved it! Great chapter! i love the brotherly protection Clay has for Rai! Cant wait for more so update soon! :D :D(like sooner than saturday cause i dont know if i'll last that long.)

Greater good? Is it Dumbledore's doing?

TE URAAASC ! ma faci sa mor de curiozitate ! nu-i frumos, chiar vreau sa vad ce se intampla si n-am rabdare pana SAMBATA :((

Your mean :(

anywayz, back to the chapter: .. singulur lucru inafara de ca ii tare mai e sa-ti dau dreptate, chestiile alea il fac mai cute pe Adin XD

Well, at least CLay and Raimundo met again.

Loved it! Clay is awesome and so is Rai! Cant wait for the update cuz honestly this is one of my favorite stories ever! :)