Reviews for Never bet with The Major |
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Rashell chapter 1 . 4/18/2012 funny and sexy chapt! plz write more:) Rashell |
Jamaica chapter 1 . 2/1/2012 I was screaming with laughter the whole way through. Thanks for the great ride CowboyJazzy. |
Mrs.CallahanAlister chapter 1 . 6/7/2011 Loved it keep it going |
Icy.Emmett.2011 chapter 1 . 3/20/2011 Very intriguing here. I actually always pictured Edward as more of an asshole, but I guess when you pair him with Jasper as you have...well we all know what a control freak and asshole he can be. Great start to the story, I am very interested in seeing where the story leads and how it resolves. bravo |
jllfish chapter 1 . 3/19/2011 that was great. looking forward to more! |
xhopelessfallsx chapter 1 . 3/16/2011 You made me crack up with Alice, but sadly I believe she should have Emmett. lmao. funny, but hot story, it'd be interesting details between Edward and Jasper. ;) Good story! |
ReluctantOptimist chapter 1 . 3/15/2011 ...that was very interesting. It was a really great start to just be smut I would say. But if you ever decide to write a sex scene between the two, I believe you should have it drawn out and have it be a fairly extensive part in the story. :) You know...it always makes a story better. haha! But anyways, good start. |
Raeya chapter 1 . 3/15/2011 Haha o god they are evil! Hope Jasper changes his mind for once though. |
DarkOneBL chapter 1 . 3/15/2011 Great start, look forward to the next chapter. Maybe Jasper will change his his mind and let Edward top at least once. |
rory chapter 1 . 3/14/2011 nice smut |
CoeurdeGael chapter 1 . 3/14/2011 Ah!AH! I hope you post the next chapter soon. CDg |
Letty1973 chapter 1 . 3/14/2011 it's a great start, so far i'm liking your story, although I hope you let Edward top sometime at least once. |