Reviews for Never bet with The Major
Rashell chapter 1 . 4/18/2012
funny and sexy chapt!

plz write more:)

Rashell
Jamaica chapter 1 . 2/1/2012
I was screaming with laughter the whole way through. Thanks for the great ride CowboyJazzy.
Mrs.CallahanAlister chapter 1 . 6/7/2011
Loved it keep it going
Icy.Emmett.2011 chapter 1 . 3/20/2011
Very intriguing here. I actually always pictured Edward as more of an asshole, but I guess when you pair him with Jasper as you have...well we all know what a control freak and asshole he can be. Great start to the story, I am very interested in seeing where the story leads and how it resolves. bravo
jllfish chapter 1 . 3/19/2011
that was great. looking forward to more!
xhopelessfallsx chapter 1 . 3/16/2011
You made me crack up with Alice, but sadly I believe she should have Emmett. lmao.

funny, but hot story, it'd be interesting details between Edward and Jasper. ;)

Good story!
ReluctantOptimist chapter 1 . 3/15/2011
...that was very interesting.

It was a really great start to just be smut I would say. But if you ever decide to write a sex scene between the two, I believe you should have it drawn out and have it be a fairly extensive part in the story. :) You know...it always makes a story better. haha! But anyways, good start.
Raeya chapter 1 . 3/15/2011
Haha o god they are evil!

Hope Jasper changes his mind for once though.
DarkOneBL chapter 1 . 3/15/2011
Great start, look forward to the next chapter. Maybe Jasper will change his his mind and let Edward top at least once.
rory chapter 1 . 3/14/2011
nice smut
CoeurdeGael chapter 1 . 3/14/2011
Ah!AH!

I hope you post the next chapter soon.

CDg
Letty1973 chapter 1 . 3/14/2011
it's a great start, so far i'm liking your story, although I hope you let Edward top sometime at least once.