Excellent story so far. I hope you will add to it!

This is off to a very interesting and entertaining start. I do hope you will consider updating it in the future! Great job with developing the characters as your own. Daphne and Tracy are rather scary, but still quite enjoyable. I fear for poor Neville... This will not end well for him!

Yeah all this manipulation and plotting. I really hope Harry retaliates with something equally or more cutthroat in return.

Well this is a very interesting story so far, I'll add this to my story alerts to see what happens next.

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I really dislike Harry, Ron and Ginny stories, especially since Ron and Ginny
are being paid to spy on Harry. My favourite pairings are Harry/Hermione,
Harry/Susan Bones, Harry/Patil Twins, Harry/Astoria, Harry/Daphne, Harry/Tracey,
and occasionally Harry/Fleur/Gabrielle. But I like it when Harry Potter, despite
Ron's "all Slytherins are evil" rant makes friends with Slytherin girls. Ron
really should check his facts. One of the most evil people ever to graduate
from Hogwarts-namely Peter Pettigrew-did NOT come from Slytherin, but
Gryffindor! I love this story, and wonder what will happen next.

please update

I like this it's a different take on a nice plot line and I like it a lot and would be vey pleased if you could continue this it would be a shame if you stopped now. Eagerly awaiting your next chapter Dante.

can you update this soon

This seems like it could be a great story. A shame is hasnt been updated in 2 years :(

Good intro excellent characters definition

Great story so far! Voters intriguing about goyle's ring! I do hope you continue this.

this is good. Neville is both lucky and unlucky

excellent story

great story

OK… interesting. I must say this is really an interesting story and I am very curious to see where it goes.

I will admit that I cannot help but feel that this chapter needed some perspective from Harry's point of view.

However so far so good, I like :)