Awzum
Awlaaaaa
Nyc1
G8
Fit
A1
Love it muwahhhhhh

OMG
Victoria z Fabia
And
Jake z Ren
K00l fanfic

chess is the answer and great story.

Man! I can't stop reading this i stayed up until 2 am just to finish this story XD seriously it's so awesome

i read this story and tempeted to finish it i was rushing it had a lot of action and it made me read it and i couldnt stop in the middle and at the the end i loved but i didnt really like the bit where shun had to give up his power and be different from alice but i do get why

thanks for posting this amozing story i enjoyed it so much

i almost cried when they cut of shun's head waaaa i am so sad!

Uhh! I hate Fabia and i hate Ren a litle less.

But still great story!

I love it! 3 3 3

Please write more!

:) :D ;)

You misspelled banned for band, but on the other hand I did like the last chapter so think you for making the last chapter.

I seriously cried when I realized this was the last chapter. I loooove your stories. You scared me at the end, I thought Shun was a goner. ;~; Wonderfully written, and you made Ren the perfect bad guy. :D

You are the fastest updater I've seen yet, and you're devoted, I love that.

I've read The Magic of Cupid, too. And I can't choose which one is the best (why should I even choose?). But, just so you know: What an amazing stories!

A very dramatic-suspense-romantic...uhh...bloody... chapter Ive ever read. I love the way you put the scenes (as always) in the climax part..(Execution part)

Love it. You've also put a little humor on your last scene: This one...

You kept it? she asked shocked. I nodded.

"Be mine?" I took her hands in mine.

Always, she whispered. I placed the necklace around her neck. It looked stunning on her. She wrapped her arms around my neck and hugged me. I wrapped my arms around her waist. Then I felt a soft pair of lips on mine. I ran my fingers through hair and took in her wonderful smell.

"Aww" I heard a bunch of people say. We finally broke apart to watch the four people walk into the room looking ashamed.

"Uhh…well here's a funny story…" Dan started.

"I don't think they want to hear it, let's just go," Runo smiled and held Dan's hand while Billy and Julie did the same.

Stalker friends wahahaha. Hope you can make another story soon.

P.S (Chess huh?...Damn no wonder I cant figure it out, I hated that game)

just when I think I know what's gonna happen next you just twist the story like it was nothing!(Well you ARE the auther you can do what ever you please[I guess])

Can you write any more unexspecting stories?

hey look, Shun got it right. he will get a marsmallow :D

the ending was really sweet. now we can say that people really can die for their loved ones.

great story dude.

Good riddle. I liked this chapter. It was good. I like the way you ended everything. The bit when Shun died and that they kissed at the end. Ren makes a good bad guy. I hope in Gundalian invader he won't be THAT bad (I haven't watched it yet).