More?

out of curiosity.. how come they did not like ask if the goblins can check for.. other contracts in case dumbledore tried to do something.. or do a check up n etc.. in case the weasleys r trying to potion them.. coz harry suddenly is obsessed n hating with draco is kinda weird.. i mean sure they r in a way enemies.. but am sure harry is not that as petty as the weasleys.. anyway update soon

I like this story! Very interesting beginning! Hope you'll continue it! :)

Are Harry and daphne going to tell people they are dating? More chapters please. I’d love to know if Ginny was given a love potion to like Harry or if she really does like him. Also if they wanted Harry to marry Ginny before he dies so they would get his money. Otherwise I’m confused by what ablus and molly were up to

more please

I like it, sad it won't be updated until next month, but like it so far.

I hope you're still writing! I really like the three chapters I've read so far and would love to see more. My one question is that Daphne seems to be different than the indifferent person we are led to understand she is, and I can understand that with Harry, but with Neville and Luna?

also, if you are rewriting, the contract is a bit confusing to me. Malfoy can step into the contract and become Lord Black, but the current Lord Black can break the contract?

I hope you continue writing this. I love the pairings.

Well done! I’m curious to see how you continue the story.

Nice chapter
Hope you would continue the story
Happy new year

love it please write more

Daphne groaned, "Harry, this is my very annoying younger sister, Daphne."

Thought you might want to change that. Great story, looking forward to reading more

Please update

Its a shame you haven't posted more. The story is interesting and enjoyable. I dont see a lot of Harry and Daphne stories that are worth reading this one definitely is.

Hey, just wanted to let you know that I am interested in the general concept. It combines my two favourite things in HP fanfiction: Daphne and Veela's.

The thing is, I think the whole premise could be done in a more leveled fashion. The way you have done it up until here (halfway chapter 1) seems very rushed.
The reasoning for the mariage contract (acceptance of it) is really good. It creates a sense of urgency by presenting a choice: Either force yourself into marriage or let the other side gain significant advantages. But it is kind of missing some reflection. I am sure the characters would have had time to discuss the issue among themselves without rushing into battle plans that look like they were made up a couple of years ago.

Also I wish you all the best for your master!
Omen