An interesting premise so far

An alright fic! :)

oh my freaking God... that man's alive! For the love of all things Sherlock just slow down! lol, although I fully support more shoving and violent kisses... it's good for recuperation and good for John...

Keep up with the good job! and can't wait to see John's reaction to Sherlock's kisses

... ... I'm impressed! To me, the most heartfelt moment was when Sherlock muttered John and the way it was described being lost... It moved me.

Anyway, keep up the great job! Can't wait to see the developments on this story and of course! the outcome of John's research!

That M at the end of the message... Ugh... :/ im not sure I want to know how moriarty's involved!

May I suggest a bit of proof reading, I spotted some easily correctable spelling mistakes scattered throughout and minor Brit-pick: "second grader" would that be the equivilent of a British child in Year three, aged about 7? you can't really put "year threer" so put "seven-year-old" instead.

uuh! could it be Jim working in the background! love this

Amazing story so far. I'm really looking forward to how you develop the plot and characters.

damn...interesting. where's this gonna go, i wonder? wow.

keep it up! gotta know what happens with our lovely boys.