OMG... Love it... #Nosebleed *!*

I liked it, though Mugen really sounded too cheesy. I think you should make another chapter, more in Jin's POV, because it's really missing in here I need closure ;_; nobody can resist to Mugen you see, nobody!... Well anyway, even though the smex scenes make me quite flushed and tense, I liked the development and think it would be a waste to leave it at that, with Mugen so dominated even though he always seems to have the upper hand in both manga and anime.

Hey! I really liked how believable you made the characters, both in this chapter and the next. Small nitpicky thing...not sure we needed the information about the two young woman who ran the hostel. It isn't really important to the story and it brings up unnecessary questions that detract from your story. I also liked how the ending isn't super sappy. I like how they act almost as though nothing has happened. Really good story!

actually very nice one. respecting the characters' personnalities. The sakura's petals are not only a beautiful imagery but also suit their twisted attraction to each other.

This is such a wonderful story, I am in love with it! I have been re-watching Samurai Champloo and finally realized, whoa, these two would make a great pairing! I am not dissapointed in the fanfiction I have found here-this is marvelous! Anyway, just thought I'd mention that. Perfect bed-time story.

Holy hell that was hot!

I never reviewed the second chapter! OMG it's amazing 3 Thank you for finishing this story!

Oh darn, I'm such a perv XD

Anyway moving on, amazing story!

Thanks a lot for writing it~

Absolutely perfect! You have a way of lkeeping them IC and yet...whoooo, I definitelly need a dip in a cold lake right about now! :D

I hope you keep updating, This has the potential of a great story!

Cheers,

Lap aka Nocens

This story is AMAZING! I just want to keep on reading more. You made the characters so realistic and they stayed in character. I could imagine them doing this so clearly. My only question is "what positions where they in trough out the whole sex scene?" I can not imagine a position in which Jin is fingering Mugen and Mugen being able to suck Jin. I thought maybe the 69 position but then I remembered that Jin had moved Mugun into a strange position in which Mugun is standing but I thought they were laying down. I'm just utterly confused at ALL the positions they were in trough out the whole story :(

my my my, what to say about this wonderful story. first I would love to say that you captured the boys wonderfully! I really though Mugen sounded like Mugen and jin sounded like jin! Bravo! Thanks for sharing it was rather tasty!

*drools a river* I've never felt like more of a pervert... Well.. I have.. But that's a story for a different day.

This. Was. So. Hot.

I LOVE Uke Mugen. That boy just NEEDS a dick up the ass! XD I don't care much for Jin...

Mugen's after-glow confession was cute.. Made me giggle.

Is that the end? I would love to read more sex filled chapters between these two.. With Mugen on bottom, of course.

Your note at the end of chapter two made me feel so bad for you. XD

This was fantastic. You kept them wonderfully IC, which really makes all the difference whether a fic works or not, and it definitely did.

This is a tease! Love it though. It's very IC (well, we don't know if they'd be in to each other sexually or not, for sure, but I think it's fairly apparent in the way they act haha) and sexy. Very good writing, too. I just wish there was a smutty continuation of where it was leading.

dude. yes. please continue it! you did their personalities pretty well and i wanna know what happens next w