the way you characterized this man so well without just making him bland and dumb as hell was so satisfying

BEAUTIFUL! AYYYYY, I CAN'T WITH THIS AMAZING STORY! IT'S JUST SOOOOO INCREDIBLE!

Thank you so very much for writing this! It really warmed my heart, to the point where I just had to let out a squeal every 5 seconds or so! This was amazing! Please, please, please, please, please keep writing luffy and nami stories! ️️️️️

Take care!

Really enjoyed this story

This is really sweet, loved the end bit with brook too .

You history I love

-around the deck but when I think about it again, I think it would be best on near the infirmary where no one can find them easily except maybe Chopper, but the kid won't bother or tease them yohoho.
And I absolutely love this! Thank you so much for your story~

And finally I found a worthy LuNa~!
This is great. Their personalities, the conflict, the fluffy fluterring moments, the opinions from others Straw Hats. I can see why they fall for each other and I can't help to fall for this ship more. The way you tell that Luffy is Nami's life and Nami is the one who brings life to him is unbearable. Moreover, I like how you capture their staring at each other. It's beautiful and finally I can adore those pair of honest and passionate eyes of Luffy. His eyes is just that powerful, I guess.
As for the headquarter for themselves, I can't imagine where Franky would put it in Sunny, but I also understand they can't just wandering everywhere to get their privacy. This shows how much you care for the original story and I absolutely love this kind of story! I imagine their HQ is

Great story.

A AAAAHHH SO SWEET!
And the personality was so perfectly portrayed!
Love how you forgot no one and you can really feel how the couple was nicely fifting into the crew life

I dunno what to say...
It's just awesome~~ ﹏

Beautiful! :)

This story is completely amazing. I absolutely love it. You captured both characters personalities as well as their beautiful relationship perfectly.

I love the way you emphasized how important Nami is to Luffy, particularly how much he wanted to protect her AND her smile. I seriously think you got Luffy's thoughts and feelings for Nami down, like, you're an expert! And I can really picture Nami getting super worried about him after every battle. Even in the manga, she seems to worry a lot more for him compared to the others, but that's just my opinion. I especially loved how you described Nami's thoughts and emotions towards Luffy's eyes. For some reason, I always thought that his eyes were one of Nami's favorite things about him because they're so intense and passionate. And I won't forget mentioning the beautiful and touching scene when Luffy held Nami's hand to his heart. Ugh, these two will officially be the end of me.

I just love how they have this unspoken language simply through sheer eye contact or small little gestures or light, fleeting touches. They understand each other so deeply, it's practically on a whole nother level.

Anyway, I enjoyed every single chapter of your fabulous story. The beginning of their relationship was similar to how I would picture it: the both of them being slightly confused but full of strange emotions because they're two people who don't realize that they love each other unconditionally. :)

The LuNa fluffiness was executed perfectly. It's hard to believe that English isn't your first language because you're a really great writer! Thank you for writing and sharing such a wonderful LuNa story. Luffy and Nami 5ever!

Very good on minimizing the OOCnesss. You should continue.

And you say English wasn't your mother tongue? You're writings are far better than mine :p I love your format and flow of your writing. It's very presentable and not bulky and just nice!

d'awwwwwww! i especially love this chapter! (i'm just weirdly obsessed with Luffy getting hurt).
great job!