I . . . personally don't believe that's how Rose would have acted, but it's still very good.

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Personally, I don't really like Rose. But, your fic reduced me to tears for her. It's just so depressing to think that, while looking for company, the doctor goes around giving people broken hearts. Rose is a really strong character in this fic, because if I was in her place, I would be bawling. Good job!

I know it's been over a year since you posted this, but as a Whovian who started on Rose/Ten, and then fell in love with Amy Pond, I just had to say, you nailed it. I can hear everyone's voice perfectly throughout the whole thing. Molte Bene.

went through Muslimbarbie's stories, found her version, looked up the song (god I love John Mayer sometimes), found this story. nothing to add except

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It is, was, so very tragic...but it was wonderfully written. I love the way you kept the characters, the feelings inside...I like the conversation between Amy and Rose, how much older Rose was. And the Doctor... I feel like you are right, that he wouldn't love her like 10 did...but at the same time, I would have thought he'd be a little bit happier about seeing her. he was ecstatic when Sarah Jane came in... Sorry, sorry, rambling... Your story was amazing and beautiful. It crushed my heart a little bit more than it already was. :D Thank you so much for writing it!

I don't think Eleven feels the same way about Rose as Ten did, and I'm so glad you wrote him that way. It was much more in character. And Amy was brilliant! I could hear her voice in my head saying your lines SO clearly. Well done!

Oh goodness. That was beautiful. It tugged at my heartstrings and makes me extremely gland Rose did have 10.5 in "real life."

They all stayed in character, which is awesome.

Wonderful story.

Just to let you know, both the plot, the general idea and the writing was all awesome. I read that while listening to Slow Dancing in a Burning Room (though it was a cover by Tyler Ward, because I love his voice) and it was truly, truly brilliant. And I managed to finish reading at the same time as the last chord was dying away, which was rather beautiful. Chaos theory is excellent.

Back to the point. It was excellent, very well done :)

Very nice! I read MuslimBarbie's so I had to come check out your fic. :) It was so angsty. :( It makes me sad to think that Rose spent all that time grieving over the Doctor; I'm glad she got in canon then. :)

hahaha! "Shut it, old man." Brilliant and absolutely Amy. Good job!

As depressing as this was. it actually helped me a lot. When i saw the season 4 fianle, when Rose went with the human doctor, i was so angry. But now i realise that it was a happy ending for them. The doctor would eventually regenirate and Rose would just get old...and well, it would suck. haha. But Rose was lucky. She got her doctor and her fairytale ending...Thank you! haha, i finally got closure that took me years to find! :)

You're a great writer by the way!

This was beautifully written. I loved how you were able to have Rose come to terms with a life without the Doctor and not being bitter or throwing accusations in his face. It was a very mature and encouraging story about moving on and accepting something that will never come to ( or maybe was never meant) to be.

i like ir, I like it alot. I find my self to be a person who can't really decide wheither I like the end plotline or not, But I think you have an interesting take on the whole situation, and I appreciate it, it's truthful and weet and good to know that now the doctor has moved on Ros can find herself in a place where she can too, mostly becuase of Amy. Amy is my favorite new series companion, and I think she kind of needed a big sister like influence like Rose has in this story, even if it just for a fleeting moment. and I think your writing style is good too! keep it up!

You have NO IDEA how glad I am that I pestered you into writing fics again. This was absolutely, positively breath taking. I can't believe you spit this out in less than twelve hours; I'm still in awe. You give me too much credit; I only tweeked. The heart of it all was you. But I'm so glad I got to be a part of the process for this. And I definitely can NOT wait to get my hands on this as well.