I like the different point of view. Lightning becoming Ragnarok instead of Fang and Vanille.

SEQUAL PLEASE!

I hope that you can write a sequel for it and somehow they free Lightning from her crystallization.

I also agree that Lightning should be the one who become Ragnorak. It feels much more a suited role for her then Vannile and Fang. I get your idea and I agree. Thanks for writing it out loud.

Really enjoyed this.I think this is a way better ending than the one in the game.

I like this alternatwe take on Ragnarok. While I enjoyed the Vanille/Fang version in the game it was to see how someone would interpret it had someone else been the chosen one. Lightning does kick ass. _ So well descriptive that I was actually able to get the imagery of the scene in my head as I read. Very fun story :D

I'll start by saying that I like the idea of Lightning being the hero of the story rather than Fang and Vanille. I guess I understand why the other two were given 'closure,' but I still think Lightning makes more sense.

Good use of imagery all around. And I loved the Yoda reference! (Do or do not. There is no try!)

I like the way you tried to draw some of the FFXIII-2 info into this story. As for manipulating the mythology, I'm with you there too. I don't really think the mythology released around the announcement of FFXIII-2 makes all that much sense in the context of FFXIII. We've discussed this at length, so I'll refrain.

Anyway, good work and thanks for sharing.

Wow, just wow, that was great.

Beautifully written, utterly beautiful. I loved it!