I'm shook! Neville Longbottom dead! He was the best of them all ... And killed in such a cruel way... I could literally feel my heart cracking into a million shards... He would have been the strongest of them all. The only true friend Harry could have had... Could it not have been anyone else? Maybe an OC character? Someone the fans wouldn't be so attached to? Someone created just for this tragedy? I think this and I'm ill all over again at my response and how the human mind works. We are such a cruel cruel species...

This was lovely, thank you for taking the time to write it.

This story was amazing!
I loved the characterization of Harry and Snape.
It’s definitely the most believable Snape is Harry’s Biological Dad story that I have read.

I thought that Sirius acting as a familiar was slightly creepy, but definitely something he would do.
I love how in-depth you go into Snape’s background.
The spell that saved Ginny was very well thought out, and I love that Severus was able to talk to Lily.

If there ever is a sequel, I will make sure to read it.

Not bad, not bad... But tooooooo long. And. WHY do you have so much need to depict professor Snape as a homosexualist? It was absolutely unnecesary for the whole plot.

I really enjoy Severitus stories at the moment, and this one is by far my favorite of all the ones I read so far!
I really love how you kept Severus so in character, creating many misunderstandings with Harry. And how even though Snape wants to do the best, sometimes he just gets mad and has to try not to take it out.
And how there is no bashing here , simply everyone trying to do their best, even Dumbledore (Though je definitely fucked up here!).
So thank you so much for writing this story, I had an amazing time reading it (and a lot of feelings as well, the story touched on a lot of sad subjects, but always in a really good way)!

Re: Ch 17, but already posted there: This is my 2nd re-read, to review on continuing to read the story: Good to see adult realization of his previous, and much improved current behavior from Snape!

My heart! I loved the tale that you told in this story. I was heart-wrenching and hopeful, and funny in some parts (a lot of those parts due to Lily :) ). One of the only continuous errors I spotted throughout (that I can remember) was the spelling of Prof. Flitwick's given name. It's spelt Filius, rather than Fileous, or anything like that.
I wish you the best of luck in the future and in your writing. Thank you for your story.

Brilliantly researched and written. And so realistic. Cheers!

I stopped reading after I realized that Snape knew that Harry was not James's son. Severus abandoned his son deliberately. He also deliberately treated him badly and compared him to James. Does your Snape have schizophrenia or no sense of pride? By insulting Harry he was insulting himself all the time! What, then, was the cause of his anger and resentment? Now he was willing to help Lily continue the Potter line. Then I don't understand why the denial and anger towards Harry? Now he found out that Harry was being bullied and he decided to take care? Children are not toys. You can't throw it out today and pick it up again in eleven years. Funny and disgusting.I understand that you made Snape as a surrogate mother, but all his actions are all somehow disgusting.
Lily's obsession with getting pregnant during the war? What's the urgency? Why not adopt?
I stopped reading it. This is not a story for everyone.

"My child" I'm in tears

I really hoped there was more. But I’m also glad that you brought issues like depression into the light, really. This was a very dedicatedly written work of art. I thank you for giving your time into writing it and sharing this with us.

“Harry, love, you’re dreaming “—Awwwwwwwww! I loved it!

Oh my god! What the extreme fuck is wrong with the entire fucking Weasley clan! Og course Snape will never do it! Oh goddddddddddddddd! I’m literally dying of laughter rn!

God! Saale sab kitne bimaar hain!

I think it’s quite hard to make me cry when reading something but this...
“The hand merely brushed his fringe out of his eyes, "Yes, of course I will." The Teller whispered, "As many as you like."”
There’s a lump in my throat that I’m failing to fight—miserably so.