Read most halo fanfics and none of the spartans act like spartans they can barely act the soldier part. This mc is even worse as he is almost as stupid as the original saito. Spartans are stable and reliable and should not be made clumsy otakus. Alsmost every spartan get angry and starts humiliating kids and offending civilians.

bro u need to continue this story and probably give saito over shield since he doesnt have a jet pack and if u lost motivation rewacth zero no tsukaima and replay reach

When you look down to earth, from space, it makes you feel like ...like you should bring a politician ,or king , or Donald Trump and tell him "Look at that...Look . At. That you son of bitch"

"See you soon." Then dosent update for 4 years

I hope to see the next chapter soon

nice story

looking forward to more
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Great chapter! *looks at profile* In hiatus? Nooooooooooooooooooo.

Staff of destruction? A say it's an M41 aka the good ol' rocket launcher.

nice work

more please i'm liking this

This is good! Please continue!

cant wait for the next chapter

there is one gigantic mistake. A spartan wil NEVER NEVER EVER go anyware in public without their armor. they would only do it if ordered by their overal military superior and still that is pushing it and they dont take it off for undercover ops because they dont usually do undercover ops but if they do they usually wher something that will cover their armor and helmet like a cloak.

when she said anger it was supposed to be noble isn't it

Update soon