cute and creepy

This story has nothing to do with Skeleton Creek, however, I do like the idea of the story. You were little so I can understand the choppiness. If it was long and written well, I think it would make a great story. You should give it another try!

i usually try to give constructive criticism, but this story is so bad i cant. you constantly switch tenses, your story is choppy and makes absolutely nosense, and while your dpelling (from what i could see) was flawless, all i can think is what the hell is this doing in skeleton creek? if you want to publish your own damn fiction, go to some other site. i doubt anyone there will like it. fanfiction is for serious writers, and your obviously not one of them.

whats this got 2 do w/skeleton creek? seriously man, u wanta post crap like this do it somewhere else. fanfiction should only have stories that relate 2 the books. besides, i can write better horror stories in ma sleep. U just got dissed by Ezio.

ummm, it's a bit weird. i don't see what this has to do with skeleton reek though. if you want to publish your own stories, go to

Lol. Cute and creepy. Hate to think what you were like when you were little. JK!