Ooooo a great end to a great story. A little too much swearing, but it was a critical part in the whole point of the story. Sooooo I can deal with it.
I do not appreciate any drugs, alcohol, or swearing, so this has meaning, and I like it no matter how much of those things it had.
Thank you for writing this incredible story! :)
~SW12

Great story, but there are a few loose ends like what happened with Ron's "friends" and the aftermath?

That was probably one of the funniest scenes I’ve ever read on this site. All I kept thinking about was the camera spinning in a circle like in That 70’s Show! It was hilarious!

The broncos? Cmon they suck booty, couldn’t have chosen anothe teams that’s good

Wow! kim cheats and ron and he just brushes it under the rug like that was not a big deal? Talking about terrible writing and a kim tard, either you are a woman? Or your some dumb man for writing this story. He don't move on either. Because of your for kim, you ruin a good potential story.

And no more high stakes missions with his friends. Two of them were completely incompetent just getting high.

Well one of them is like a super genius possibly rivaling Wade.

Ron's life is taking a positive turn at the moment.

what the fuckpeople walk over you and you lick their boots? Ron, not cool.

my heart will always be with Kim. this is why he stays a loser, it's by choice, unwilling to accept reality, to move on, to be mature.

I really really want to find a fanfic where Ron goes dark and goes on a killing spree. This was interesting but too bland for my taste.

I think this fanfic was too rushed for my taste, but the plot was interesting. I am now going to check out some of your other fanfics.

Without reading the rest of the chapter: was that a "Basketball Diaries" reference you snuck in there?

Wait, was that a "Red vs Blue" reference, with the bread?

Oh yeah, did I mention that I've been skipping the whole stoner-group-banter thing? I hang out with stoners about half the time, and since they form my basis for the whole "stoner" thing, and are pretty docile, cool guys, it kinda clashes.

But it might be that I read these things for some quality Kim-Ron angst and relationship deconstructions, so yeah. On that front, you're pretty good - the whole "Kim breaks up with Ron and then immediately regrets it" is a common theme in KP fanfics, but it's generally treated, as you do here, with seriousness, because it's more likely than the fairy-tale ending thing.

I'm reading with earnest.

All in all a good story. for me it had to end with them together as I am a huge Kim/Ron fan so I am glad it did cuz I was worried a few times but you pulled it threw. My only big issue is the unresolved nature of how Ron and KP make it work with them living in 2 diff towns. sure they can drive but Upperton aint down the block how do they manage not seeing each other every day and if they do see each other so often how, where do they get the time. Anyway that's just my one gripe other then that I liked it as a whole.

Nice story man