Very good start. However, I'm not sure Imperials (even if they are undercover, which might be based on some of Ryan's thoughts) would openly use Mando'a. Mandalore is occupied by the Empire, and Mand'alor Shysa is leading a resistance. The Empire might see using Mando'a as treason.

But that's a very minor detail. Well written, and the imagery is pretty good. Having fun guessing who might be from the Halo universe. Or not yet... Well, I might see next chapter.

Good story
Keep on going.

Well I just found this today and I must say pretty damn impressive, I'm on the edge of my seat waiting to see how everything will mesh. Take your time and do it right, excellent job so far.

This story is getting pretty good. Keep writing.

Interesting story, can't wait to see what happens next

Z-95 headhunters don't have hyperdrive systems unless customized and seriously? di'kut is the Guy even mandalorian? A lot of people in the star wars galaxy dont know mando'a especially not non civies. Hell not even Bob's knew it that is how rare it is.