Very well-written. I really liked the glimpse into the pasts of both Revy and Eda that you provide. I've always thought there was the potential for something more between these two and you developed it in a completely believable way.

Quite an excellently written fanfiction. I think you captured the mood of the couple as I saw it perfectly. It's an interesting theory that they have known each other since they lived in the US, though, I always felt they were slightly closer in age probably. I can't really see Eda being too much older than Revy. hahaha

Great job, definitely favoriting this.

This was an interesting take, and well written :)

This story was perfect. I love how in character they both were despite the obvious change in their relationship from the show, felt very natural. And actually... I feel as though it could fit into the plot already set up in the show.

I really love the fact that you brought in their past too, nice touch. :D

Just found this little gem and I thought I'd thank you for writing it. I'm off to bed now but I'm... well, I can't describe it, at peace I suppose would be the best way to put it, after reading this. So again, thanks.

-Aidis

Interesting backstory for Revy, though I always imagined her as an orphan growing up on the strets- excellent writing though, shame you don't usually write 'this kind' of fic.

Nice read: unique pairing(loved the pair by the way) and the backstory fit the characters perfectly. Never thought of this before but now i see the potential and would like to see more. No rush

An interesting take and storyline, though I'm not sure if this was my favourite pair from you. Still, I'm happy for you; that you went out of your comfort zone means a lot.

: )

Thanks for sharing!

Best,

Kat

well done

NO NO NO! I refuse to let this story end! Like you said, you can keep doing this! There are more ideas you & I both have.

Thanks for the kind words. But I don't think I was that much help to you..

A fascinating read, mate.

I agree with what you said on the author's notes since I personally wouldn't believe a Revy/Eda pairing would be believable (except maybe if it was a 3-way with Rock but I'm not sure if that would work out xD) but I got a good kick out of this.

I still prefer the Rock/Revy fics that you've made but I still enjoyed this, the flashback sections were quite an interesting touch as well.

Wow. I never saw something like this coming so soon. Actually, I did, but not like a gift for a fan or whatever. Still, I enjoyed this story, much like the others. I always felt that Revy and Eda had some sort of history before the current Black Lagoon storyline with Rock and all. I'd definitely like to read more about these 2 from you. ;3

Keep it up!